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Wow, this is like 'spooky' --- really powerful and 'dark' indeed Mariss - you did good with this write. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 2, 2010 at 8:07 PM
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Brilliant close for me! It got me thinking in several directions, even speaking to my own dilemmas, it's uncanny how omens can be such that they reveal the things one might never speculate on! I read this twice and I think it has a lot of deep meaning to it! I love it when another can inspire the poet, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 2, 2010 at 3:24 AM
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Excellent poem, so much of the dark side around these days.
posted by
shobana
on December 1, 2010 at 10:22 PM
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I did enjoy this poem very much.
posted by
MsJudy
on December 1, 2010 at 3:26 PM
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this reads like a thriller movie ..yet it alsoreads of the human spirit...
the dark side most of us control.
posted by
Kabu
on December 1, 2010 at 12:05 PM
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This put me in the mind of "SHOCKER" able to posses humans bodies as long as if they were healthy! Deep read.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 1, 2010 at 11:47 AM
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