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Re: shobana
thank you so much!!!
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 9:24 AM
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Re: lionreign
I think imposed structure rarely does... but perhaps we can build a new one between us - thanks Bill
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 9:22 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thank you so much dear friend, sorry to have deprived you for so long :D
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 9:08 AM
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Re: Putting The Pieces
thanks Cheerygirl - it was - this was a light hearted poke at myself
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 9:05 AM
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Re: Putting The Pieces
Thanks LadyBugJudy
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 8:54 AM
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Re: well you tried and I think that she is a little ungrateful not to appreciate
Thanks Kabu! Perhaps all will be explained if I say that the statue was a metaphor for a relationship
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 8:31 AM
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Re: elysianfields
thanks Elyse - I missed being here!
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 8:24 AM
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Re: Corncroak
If nothing else it was well meant
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 8:03 AM
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Re: Mystereo
thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 8:02 AM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you! I had a couple of technical issues I had to resolve... service as normal now though :D
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 7:12 AM
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Re: by the tiime I read the second paragraph I was thinking
thanks Tzippy, it's nice to know that you're following my line of thought - this is very much a poem about the dangers of assumption
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 7:12 AM
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Re: Yes, I too was smiling by the time I got to the end!
Great! Thanks malcolm!
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 6:56 AM
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Re: lionreign, very nicely done....
Thanks Rumor, I'm delighted to have got a chuckle
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 6:40 AM
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Re: You make me want to know more of this story.
thanks Randir, I was feeling quite wry when I wrote it
posted by
lionreign
on December 2, 2010 at 6:38 AM
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This is great lionreign..and I loved the close too.
posted by
shobana
on December 1, 2010 at 10:27 PM
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lionreign
I hope that it stays together. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on December 1, 2010 at 9:54 PM
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This is marvelous! What a dynamic close! I was missing you so much and I am so happy to see a post! Your poetry always makes me feel so very good! I do love your imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 1, 2010 at 6:32 PM
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Putting The Pieces
I like it. I see humor in the last line and I hope it is written wryly. Enjoyable read.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 1, 2010 at 6:32 PM
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Putting The Pieces
Great poem..I agree with Kabu!
posted by
MsJudy
on December 1, 2010 at 4:12 PM
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well you tried and I think that she is a little ungrateful not to appreciate
your loving effort.
posted by
Kabu
on December 1, 2010 at 1:04 PM
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LionR - Its good to see you here. Missed you and so, you've been busy - Well, try and try again and I guess with some yes, you should consult first? Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 1, 2010 at 12:38 PM
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Good marks for trying Lion you should have called it a Picasso
posted by
C_C_T
on December 1, 2010 at 11:06 AM
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I really enjoyed the creativity of your words and the realization of knowledge of one self, great read!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 1, 2010 at 11:00 AM
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Well, it was very much worth waiting a couple of weeks for another post. You haven't been coming around here much lately. Great poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 1, 2010 at 10:37 AM
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by the tiime I read the second paragraph I was thinking
is she going to appreciate all this putting together, so that the last line didnt surprise me.
I know how woman think these days.
I love the story this simple poem was able to tell about a tale that is complicated and a love that is simple, really great work
posted by
Tzippy
on December 1, 2010 at 9:46 AM
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Yes, I too was smiling by the time I got to the end!
posted by
malcolm
on December 1, 2010 at 9:19 AM
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lionreign, very nicely done....
quietly humourous, I had a grin develop soon after starting the read and a good chuckle by its end..
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posted by
Rumor
on December 1, 2010 at 8:53 AM
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You make me want to know more of this story.
Standing alone as simply a poem, it has a nice rhythm to it, cheery but a little wry.
posted by
Randir
on December 1, 2010 at 8:29 AM
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