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all i can say is 'my oh my'.......love it!!!!!
posted by
icedlatte
on December 4, 2010 at 3:56 AM
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Contest with Myself :)
The second one has possibilities, and sounds very interesting if you work out the start.
But the first one is OK as well.
Either way you will feel what one flows, and what one is just that bit more difficult for you to write and doesn't quite have you dashiing off line after line; even though you have to rewrite all your drafts anyway ha ha.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 2, 2010 at 4:34 PM
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I liked this one and I read the other one first! WOW! You have me hanging on, this is a good hook! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 2, 2010 at 10:59 AM
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You write a captivating and powerful tale there. I hope that you share more of your fiction with us. You have a knack for it, I feel.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 1, 2010 at 11:12 AM
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