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Thank you Mystereo glad you think so
posted by
C_C_T
on December 1, 2010 at 12:50 PM
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Re: very well written and very strong words, it conjures up feelings
How right you are Tzippy but to write the poem one has to experience the past again sad but true.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 1, 2010 at 12:48 PM
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Re: I really enjoyed this
Great Malcolm hope you are OK.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 1, 2010 at 12:46 PM
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Thank you Lion glad to see you back, I expect you have work to do, it's not so easy.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 1, 2010 at 12:45 PM
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The titles set off everything but, the read has to be read in order for the title to show it's true power!! Great read!!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 1, 2010 at 11:56 AM
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very well written and very strong words, it conjures up feelings
of a lost future that everyone has experienced, but dont forget, THE FUTURE IS NEVER LOST. it is the regrets that steal the future.
This is one of great words of wisdom to remind us, to live in the present yet it causes your heart to pintch just a little.
posted by
Tzippy
on December 1, 2010 at 10:15 AM
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I really enjoyed this
posted by
malcolm
on December 1, 2010 at 9:29 AM
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Superb poem!
posted by
lionreign
on December 1, 2010 at 7:10 AM
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Well you are a good girl Justi so that's alright
posted by
C_C_T
on December 1, 2010 at 7:04 AM
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Re: SAM
I would like to get rid of the ghosts Sam
posted by
C_C_T
on December 1, 2010 at 7:03 AM
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Yes FS don't ride a motor bike with a leather jacket the cold gets into your back so an old chap told me yesterday and he's still got a pain there now.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 1, 2010 at 7:01 AM
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Re: I just have to agree with Justi, with everyone really
Thank you Kabu but you don't have to
posted by
C_C_T
on December 1, 2010 at 6:59 AM
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Re: Wiley
Well they are there for some Wiley don't steal them all.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 1, 2010 at 6:58 AM
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Re: E.E.
I don't know what to say either E.E.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 1, 2010 at 6:56 AM
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Cc ~ all I can write is, moving - this 'one time' peacefully stirs emotion. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on December 1, 2010 at 5:51 AM
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Facing the fact of those starry nights coming to an end would be upsetting I should think.Strange how quickly the road we travel changes into mud. Great poetry old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 30, 2010 at 9:27 PM
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I just have to agree with Justi, with everyone really
You are a really good poet.
posted by
Kabu
on November 30, 2010 at 9:25 PM
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So sad it is when someone ends up with a lost future...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 30, 2010 at 6:18 PM
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Corncroak
#, A dramatic poetic journey sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 30, 2010 at 5:15 PM
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C.C....
Very thought-provoking and bittersweet...and yes, that last line is another one-of-a-kind in its power.
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posted by
Rumor
on November 30, 2010 at 4:15 PM
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This was rather philosophical and again a most powerful ending! The last line was stupendous! You should get these in print CC!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 30, 2010 at 2:10 PM
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Wow, wow I don't know what to say, except you are a really good poet.
posted by
Justi
on November 30, 2010 at 12:45 PM
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