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Have you changed jobs then Mystereo? Or do you do several jobs?

posted by Cheerygirl on December 4, 2010 at 2:11 PM | link to this | reply

Great stuff.  It makes me want to yell at you to go for it.  She just might be waiting, waiting, waiting for you to introduce yourself.

posted by TAPS. on November 29, 2010 at 2:17 PM | link to this | reply

very powerful stuff, Mystereo....
one could almost call it a deja vu, but "have we met before?" becomes the question....well done job of capturing all of the mystery between these two strangers....

posted by Rumor on November 28, 2010 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

fear of rejection, is very common, I had a neighbor once that
I watched for more than year with a heavy crush, one day after days and weeks and months of watching him with longing and heartbeat, I finally had the guts to say hello, he turned out to be a really nice guy. I was in high school, but i always wished I would not have waited that long. Strangers are only strangers until the moment you break the ice.....hope to hear the next poem called Lovers.......

posted by Tzippy on November 28, 2010 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

you need to stand tall, approach with confidence, be sure of yourself

 

posted by eburns111 on November 28, 2010 at 6:38 AM | link to this | reply

6 feet tall basketball head! Do you own it or just know of it?
Many years ago my husband used to coach a children's team basketball. :)

posted by Cheerygirl on November 28, 2010 at 6:21 AM | link to this | reply

be safe bro !

posted by Star5_ on November 27, 2010 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply

Astonishing read! I loved the build up to the most apt conclusion! Strangers indeed, but the heart does think otherwise! Such a fine flowing poem, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on November 26, 2010 at 11:58 PM | link to this | reply

 Mystereo - a mystery - these feelings and stranger...from the heart.  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on November 26, 2010 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

STRANGERS

Sizzling! Pretty hot there Mystereo. Great stuff.

Thank you for all your comments and stories. I ENJOY THEM ALL.

posted by Cheerygirl on November 26, 2010 at 12:52 PM | link to this | reply

well done!

posted by Ariala on November 26, 2010 at 5:31 AM | link to this | reply

Mystero
Very touching Sir, I wonder how many lonely women wonder why no one appreciates them, Sometimes  there is an aloofness that is hard to understand, necessary of course in a lot of cases.

posted by C_C_T on November 26, 2010 at 12:05 AM | link to this | reply

It is an excellent poem mystereo..very heartfelt.

posted by shobana on November 25, 2010 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

I can feel the imagery!

posted by Straightforward on November 25, 2010 at 7:56 PM | link to this | reply

Mysterio

  I feel this way love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on November 25, 2010 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply