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Thanks for your help JFM! I used some of your advice, and spun some in slightly different ways. Thanks everyone for your comments :)
posted by
calia14
on November 27, 2010 at 5:27 AM
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Discovery
A sublime meditation on music. Don't worry about meter too much, it's the imagery and colour of the verse that count.
posted by
2Philomena
on November 26, 2010 at 4:38 AM
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I love the last stanza! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 25, 2010 at 8:16 AM
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What a wonderful way in which to spend one's time.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 24, 2010 at 2:24 PM
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Someone help me with meter! I like the concept of this poem, but its meter is all off.
posted by
calia14
on November 23, 2010 at 9:52 PM
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