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] The poem gets inside you from within through passion. It expresses it outwardly through words ha love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 23, 2010 at 8:57 PM
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Quite a feat to do near rhyme while letting other word patter the parameters of thoughts less refined--is not to stutter/ the 5th dimension is not my rudder (if I stutter) where the next verse might be
while I remain undefined, a poem is only as good as its rhyme...a touche!
posted by
jfm32
on November 23, 2010 at 7:08 PM
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there are reasons unknown why we have to suffer through pain and sorrow, only to be told when there are no longer any tomorrows
posted by
eburns111
on November 23, 2010 at 2:02 PM
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