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thanks for the comment shobana, now as for the galaxy of lights, it was fitting for the poem and plus gave it more of a vivid image. Think.........NIGHT!
posted by
eburns111
on November 23, 2010 at 6:10 PM
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eburns --- wow, such imagery --- and I could 'feel' the slither, slink, slide of it all --- Perfect!!! ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 23, 2010 at 7:11 AM
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Creepy, scary things eburn..I wonder where the galaxy of lights fit in.
posted by
shobana
on November 23, 2010 at 12:06 AM
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Right on! Now it's time to break his personal best ! Wonderful read! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 22, 2010 at 5:35 PM
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Hey, slippery, scary, slithering images
posted by
Straightforward
on November 22, 2010 at 5:19 PM
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EBURNS
Now whatever would you want to go on that for after reading your scary expectation. Well you certainly put me off, did you find out what she had eaten. Perhaps next time you visit. Very vivid poem curry anyone.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 22, 2010 at 10:40 AM
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