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I can feel the 'hush' ~ the end line is power with it all. Beautiful, Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 23, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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excellent
posted by
eburns111
on November 22, 2010 at 5:38 PM
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The moon has its effect on life! Dynamic poem, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 22, 2010 at 7:29 AM
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A delightful churning of emotions Lauren, very well wrtten
posted by
C_C_T
on November 21, 2010 at 11:14 PM
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Captivating!
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 21, 2010 at 7:08 PM
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Very interesting and deep read I read it twice to really absorb the feel , great read!
posted by
Mystereo
on November 21, 2010 at 4:21 PM
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