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Wonderful escapade of thought. Inner tension of a form held tight while the outer form /ideas disintegrate thru the opposite of chaos/war. Interesting harken to an idea one might hold on to momentarily, but doesn't really matter in the scope of things. Love it, Love it Love it!Complete outer disintegration, and within all that, one tiny idea of order, which becomes the poem. Other than that, I did like it.
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jfm32
on November 21, 2010 at 12:56 PM
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This is an excellent synopsis of the story as I have come to understand it! It leaves the reading wanting just as the snippets beg (in the reader's eye) for more reading! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 21, 2010 at 11:01 AM
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Amazingly told Mariss..I think eventually the good always triumphs.
posted by
shobana
on November 21, 2010 at 2:12 AM
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Remember that thing about losing the soul and winning the war?
posted by
Straightforward
on November 20, 2010 at 11:09 PM
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So well put together you made it seem so real as if it was true, amazing read.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 20, 2010 at 9:31 PM
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Y Yes the religious and the sci fi alien abduction like if C.S. Lewis wrote a poem love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on November 20, 2010 at 8:38 PM
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this is so good, I do hope it goes on --- and as far as She - she reminds me of Deborah, the Prophetess in Judges --- this is fantastic, Mariss ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 20, 2010 at 12:56 PM
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eow a halloween story this and I feel there can be more!
posted by
Kabu
on November 20, 2010 at 11:07 AM
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