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C.C. ....
"to analyse the extraordinary and catalogue the mystique."
Now there is a heavy task indeed...but,
"To have seen the flower would have been wonder enough"
So near it is (she is), and yet so far.....well done as always..
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posted by
Rumor
on November 18, 2010 at 7:24 AM
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Excellent work CC... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 18, 2010 at 7:01 AM
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This line was so real for me because I know it intimately:
I draw comfort from the pain that swirls around me. It just speaks volumes for me! sam 
posted by
sam444
on November 18, 2010 at 6:48 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE's imagery Bill
It's always the same for me Bill.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 17, 2010 at 11:11 PM
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Re: Elements
Thank you C.G. I hope you are a good judge.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 17, 2010 at 11:10 PM
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Yes you must remember that Shobana give a little skip every five steps that should confuse them. Thank you dear
posted by
C_C_T
on November 17, 2010 at 11:09 PM
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With nostalgia FS I'll let you know how I feel
posted by
C_C_T
on November 17, 2010 at 11:07 PM
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Re: E E.
Thank you E.E surprising what one can dig out and modify
posted by
C_C_T
on November 17, 2010 at 11:05 PM
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Re: CORNCRAKE Wiley
Yes I know Wiley but we can't live in the past or there would be no future.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 17, 2010 at 11:03 PM
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CORNCAKE's imagery
ZR Sharp thorns where ribbons hang – Excellent sir! BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 17, 2010 at 8:42 PM
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Elements
You are a gifted poet CC.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 17, 2010 at 6:50 PM
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Brilliant poetry CC, I loved how you wrote about the codes made by the tap of heels..awesome!
posted by
shobana
on November 17, 2010 at 6:36 PM
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Such powerful memories expressed in this poem. I wonder how I will look back on today when it is years ago...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 17, 2010 at 3:45 PM
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Awesome poetry here dear CC - this one could bring tears...what a moving piece. Every bit of this is filled - packed with such human thought and emotion...stirring. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on November 17, 2010 at 3:35 PM
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CORNCRAKE
I hate those 'memories that had long been abandoned,' especially if they are of my first wife.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 17, 2010 at 11:49 AM
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Hello Kabu, I hope you feel better, Thank you for calling, I do miss you when you are away. I have to be so polite to everyone and I think it brings me out in a rash. If I do annoy you please tell me, I thought of being a vicar once, no that's wrong I was asked if I wanted to carry a brass plate for some reason, but I didn't so I just carved my name on the Church Pillar instead.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 17, 2010 at 11:18 AM
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Sometimes things are best left in our dreams...the daily grind of reality
may have ruined the dream.
posted by
Kabu
on November 17, 2010 at 10:11 AM
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