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"Last ripples sparkle as white as lace
and more would mean less." --- CC, the close cinches with such soft froth - foam of the ebb and flow of this moving poem. This is another great read/write of yours. E.E.

posted by elysianfields on November 17, 2010 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

Re: This poem really drew me in

Well done Malcom that's what we are here for.

posted by C_C_T on November 17, 2010 at 6:40 AM | link to this | reply

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Femia you are so sweet a pity you play games with my U.A. He walks round with a silly smile on his face

posted by C_C_T on November 17, 2010 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply

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Well John I don't really want to write every day sometimes I look at an old poem and try to improve on it, one does need time and the right feeling. I thought you were retired so you go up in my esteem. I know I write rubbish sometimes, but I haven't got a tidy mind so it is nice when you OK one sometimes.

posted by C_C_T on November 17, 2010 at 6:35 AM | link to this | reply

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Yes a bad feeling Wiley, you must have had a little bit of a good time you would be a very bitter man if you didn't feel upset. Kabu will tell you that, it doesn't mean that you would ever want to go back to that time. It is just human kindness.

posted by C_C_T on November 17, 2010 at 6:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Shobana

Thank you dear try carrying a banana, so much quicker and the cat wont snaffle it.

posted by C_C_T on November 17, 2010 at 6:23 AM | link to this | reply

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you are always refreshing FS

posted by C_C_T on November 17, 2010 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Tuesday, November 16, 2010 'Sometime.'

That's alright then C.G. thank you

posted by C_C_T on November 17, 2010 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

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Great LB thank you.

posted by C_C_T on November 17, 2010 at 6:17 AM | link to this | reply

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you are running out of ink Bill or else it's cloudy

posted by C_C_T on November 17, 2010 at 6:16 AM | link to this | reply

CORNCAKE

{ The scratched clouds show your thoughts imaginatively sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on November 17, 2010 at 4:34 AM | link to this | reply

Corncrake, I really enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing it.

posted by MsJudy on November 16, 2010 at 11:13 PM | link to this | reply

Tuesday, November 16, 2010 'Sometime.'

Good. I like this poem CC.

posted by Cheerygirl on November 16, 2010 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

The water evokes so many different feelings.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 16, 2010 at 6:35 PM | link to this | reply

I love the ripples created by the pebbles CC..great poem. No tuna, too much in a hurry..lol.

posted by shobana on November 16, 2010 at 5:09 PM | link to this | reply

Sounds as though deep thoughts have resurfaced to be dealt with.

The water may be deep but your poem ensures it is COOL!

posted by Kabu on November 16, 2010 at 3:45 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCRAKE

I had a telephone call from my oldest daughter in the west, that left me feeling like your pebble skipping across the water and then sinking into oblivion. She called to advise me that her mother from whom I have been divorced for 32 years, had suffered a heart attack, and my emotions simply went back to that angry time and I've been underwater ever since.

posted by WileyJohn on November 16, 2010 at 3:25 PM | link to this | reply

your're hard to keep up with (since I'm not retired and you keep writing everyday). I really liked this one--a shimmering surface with unknown depths, and a voice that would seem to reconcile two disparate directions into the voice of self-knowlege. All the parts work for me--both the written form and the inner descent thru dramatugy. One of your best.