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The TRUST is evident here - the courage and the determination...I loved this writing. Inspiring!!! dear Mariss ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 17, 2010 at 2:55 PM
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Your poem is beautifully written and I enjoyed it very much.
posted by
MsJudy
on November 16, 2010 at 11:42 PM
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Amen! It is about trust! Such wonderful imagery, too! The eagle is so majestic! I read a cool thing about eagles this morning in an email! It talked about them living until age 70! But, at forty their beak turns down, their talons can't pick up pray! they go to a high nest and break off the beak, it grows back, then they take out their talons and they grow back, then their feather so they can fly again! It is a painful process, but they get through it to live another comfortable 30 years! I took it as a fine lesson for myself! Hang in their, faith is like the eagle, we just keep doing what we need to do to get to that improved quality of life! Fine imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 16, 2010 at 4:27 PM
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And trust to the end....that is what we must all do though sometimes
it is difficult...your poem is most wonderful and I shall keep it if I may.
posted by
Kabu
on November 16, 2010 at 3:29 PM
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Wow! Title and rhythm of speak works as one voice. I love being brought into a poem and be carried by words in the voice of a speaker into "being there" as a participant. Wonderful piece, and made my day.
posted by
jfm32
on November 16, 2010 at 2:43 PM
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Well done. I loved it.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 16, 2010 at 8:15 AM
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