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I've always heard that when one door closes, another opens.
But, often we obstinately pound on the closed door, wanting our own way.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 15, 2010 at 9:20 AM
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I am fascinated, especially by the realisations in the last verse which imply a wisdom that differs radically from convention
posted by
lionreign
on November 15, 2010 at 7:42 AM
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Hi Janey glad you are back, thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 11:49 PM
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Always things unsaid Sam but sometmes it works.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 11:48 PM
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Sometimes it feels right afterwards FS.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 11:47 PM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you Shobana I always accept explanations
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 11:44 PM
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missed reading your poetry -
posted by
janey_
on November 14, 2010 at 6:39 PM
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Closed outwardly but perhaps inside there is an indescribable yearning... perhaps for missed opportunity, things unsaid, and so forth! Wonderful thought provoking imagery, it gets the reader thinking! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 14, 2010 at 5:38 PM
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The first thing that popped into my mind after finishing this poem was the lack of closure. So painful it is when we do not get it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 14, 2010 at 3:26 PM
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Lots of questions remain unanswered CC..Great poem.
posted by
shobana
on November 14, 2010 at 3:00 PM
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Re: Teddy
Thank you Teddy
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 11:23 AM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 14, 2010 at 10:39 AM
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Re: Well done malcom
Thank you malcom
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 10:30 AM
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Re: Reflecting leads to maturing...
Thank you Ash I am sure you are right
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 10:30 AM
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Well done
on another fine piece of writing
posted by
malcolm
on November 14, 2010 at 9:11 AM
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Reflecting leads to maturing...
Accepting leads to peacefully existing..you seem to have done both! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 14, 2010 at 8:21 AM
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Re: profound....find something I can identify with there.
Thank you Ms Straightforward I would imagine so in a gentle way
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 7:28 AM
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Re: lauren
Hello lauren, now what else would you wish?
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 7:25 AM
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Re: Very dreamy! Liker!
Thank you Sir, sometimes we are dreamy
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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Re: EE
Lo E.E. thank you for the explanation . We who live by the vision
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 7:21 AM
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CC~ Distinctive sense throughout the read; like this reader wants to turn a page and find yet another vision...this is sensitively, moving. Yes, it is very so. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on November 14, 2010 at 7:01 AM
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Very dreamy! Liker!
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on November 14, 2010 at 5:57 AM
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wow!!!! nothing else
posted by
spiderfly
on November 14, 2010 at 5:48 AM
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profound....find something I can identify with there.
posted by
Straightforward
on November 14, 2010 at 5:24 AM
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