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Still wonderful to have those who care despite those questions.
posted by
mariss9
on November 15, 2010 at 10:36 AM
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Excellent imagery! I could relate to it! It can be difficult when the answers are not readily available! I was talking with my sister this morning regarding things that happened in childhood for which there are no answer but like the poem we keep walking the halls in hopes of finding a clue or anything that will move it to a conclusion! Great thought provoking poem, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 14, 2010 at 1:29 PM
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I liked it!
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on November 14, 2010 at 8:00 AM
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You have it nailed eburns I think the most frightening time is in between when one has half reasoning.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 13, 2010 at 11:29 PM
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Excellent...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 13, 2010 at 10:09 PM
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this is powerful --- imagery so rich and it reminds me actually of a person who is losing ground - maybe with loss of memory - aging - dementia - this is poignant. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 13, 2010 at 8:44 PM
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So touchingly melancholic and beautifully written.
posted by
shobana
on November 13, 2010 at 7:33 PM
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Wow what a read you kept my mind heart and soul on the edge, what's on the next line.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 13, 2010 at 6:31 PM
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