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How wonderfully said Sinome..I think it is so true.
posted by
shobana
on November 13, 2010 at 8:08 PM
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something so special how can you forget,but still move forward
posted by
eburns111
on November 13, 2010 at 4:44 PM
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Eyes are the window to the soul...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 13, 2010 at 4:06 PM
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Sinome
Very compelling!
posted by
Nautikos
on November 13, 2010 at 1:38 PM
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I believe that NOTHING is ever forgotten
it just remains dormant and comes alive when a trigger brings it forth.
posted by
Tzippy
on November 13, 2010 at 10:19 AM
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I was just emailing back and forth with a dear friend in FL who is losing her husband of 30 years to cancer. He is at home with her under hospice care and everyday the end comes closer. This poem is so like what we were just talking about.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 13, 2010 at 6:59 AM
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Sinome
ZR A love through words that we can feel love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
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BC-A
on November 13, 2010 at 4:13 AM
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posted by
Nita09
on November 13, 2010 at 2:36 AM
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Wonderful...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 13, 2010 at 1:03 AM
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Yes a bit of rough Simone more of a stronger woman speaking here as we all must be at times good I think we like it.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 12, 2010 at 10:55 PM
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'stash' our memories --- deep in the heart ~ this does tug at the heart...Sinome, you write so passionately of Love that a reader swoons from the power. Elyse xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on November 12, 2010 at 10:02 PM
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Wow! Whatcha you trying to do--knocka my socks off? 1st line is wonderful and I liked how you used space, and being in black and white
(and actual margins)...well, I could see right away something new is happening here. First off, I felt a certain freedom of voice--not that you didn't have it before, it just seemed expression was a little looser and perhaps a bit more conversational. Hey, it works for me.
posted by
jfm32
on November 12, 2010 at 9:48 PM
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Wow, very interesting read, I feel that special place would be friendship no more, for I,m pleased with my moving forward!
posted by
Mystereo
on November 12, 2010 at 9:15 PM
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