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I guess so eburns, the trouble is people change and also probably expect too much.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 14, 2010 at 7:13 AM
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love sometimes easy come easy go, we all hope for true long lasting love
posted by
eburns111
on November 13, 2010 at 4:58 PM
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Thank you Simone one tries to feel what others might feel
posted by
C_C_T
on November 13, 2010 at 11:34 AM
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Oh you romantic soul you... this is beautifull and a little heartbraking... just my taste :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 13, 2010 at 8:34 AM
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Oh Shobana if you hadn't been so nice I was going to say thank you sister, and now I can't
posted by
C_C_T
on November 13, 2010 at 6:38 AM
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Oh she's a cute chick FS. It doesn't do to upset her.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 13, 2010 at 6:36 AM
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Oh yes like a song thrush in Spring E.E. Sorry I was thinking of someone else. No sadly it gives a plaintive cry when disturbed as it hides in reeds and long grasses. Flies away 'Cark, cark, cark.'
posted by
C_C_T
on November 13, 2010 at 6:34 AM
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I wondered if this would touch a chord Sam. No names no pack drill.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 13, 2010 at 6:28 AM
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Fabulous imagery! I loved this:
Am I not drawn by the hour glass sand a destiny marked lightly just a fusion of kisses and the twist of a hand a few flowers to complete the illusion. DYNAMIC!!! sam 
posted by
sam444
on November 13, 2010 at 12:02 AM
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It's as if Jane, you/she feels like her times up soon or her heart will be broken ~ and I wonder, does a corncrake sing? This is touching - E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on November 12, 2010 at 8:38 PM
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I like Jane's tone as she goes through all of these deep thoughts of hers.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 12, 2010 at 3:44 PM
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Such a lovely poem CC. Great Job and I love it.
posted by
shobana
on November 12, 2010 at 2:04 PM
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