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Oh ~ 'Could I just go round and criticize everyone?' 'For about a week, I told him. --- so I'm to consider if it be CC or UA within the comments. This could prove to be interesting - fun and a mystery eh? ~ E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on November 13, 2010 at 8:19 AM
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Make way please for another lady, yes she can sit on my lap, we have both got headaches.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 13, 2010 at 6:48 AM
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Re: EE.
Uncle Albert mulls over it E.E. I told him he could go through some early poems that I put on once and tidy them up. He gave me a woeful look 'What's it all about,' he asked sadly. 'Could I just go round and criticize everyone?' 'For about a week, I told him.'
posted by
C_C_T
on November 13, 2010 at 6:46 AM
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UA --- are you wanting to leave a bit? possibly to sidle next to an endearing lady you've found? or is the train, with its wailful whistle that's urging you onward into utopia? I mean oblivion? I read the last poem and re-read...my what scads of imagery I had by first cup of coffee...when I arrive back home near sunset, by then, yes, I may read again - sometimes, UA, you leave me 'speechless' ~ Madam E.E.
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elysianfields
on November 12, 2010 at 9:38 AM
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Perhaps they will make room! But I want to get on the train to oblivion myself! It sounds like a rail I would be enlightened with as well! I love this poem! It has a lot of fiber to it and I think it can be far reaching imagery for the reader, too! sam
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sam444
on November 12, 2010 at 8:09 AM
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