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This is so beautiful, and so "seasonal". I love it.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 13, 2010 at 7:01 AM
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GOrgeous imagery and the senses are touched by each line - like ebb and flow - this poem rocks. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 12, 2010 at 10:04 PM
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Sinome
Wonderful imagery. Be blessed dear lady.
posted by
Justi
on November 12, 2010 at 7:50 PM
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That scenery is very much met to be enjoyed with someone else.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 12, 2010 at 4:04 PM
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This is stunning, pure beauty right up to the end and then that last line changes the tone completely xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on November 12, 2010 at 7:03 AM
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posted by
Nita09
on November 12, 2010 at 4:02 AM
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Well Simone I suspect it is not difficult to stand at the waters edge and feel as you do, you open the gateway in this poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 11, 2010 at 11:43 PM
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Sinome
{ There’s a lot of beauty there if you look love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 11, 2010 at 10:56 PM
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Excellent, Marta...as always...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 11, 2010 at 10:30 PM
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