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Highly entertaining and quite a surprising finish too

posted by lionreign on November 12, 2010 at 6:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FS
FS Yes I guess she's been around the car wash, I mean the block a few times.  

posted by C_C_T on November 12, 2010 at 2:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re: A Poem by Jane
Well Femia it is not often that my muse lets Jane write anything, but I'm sure she would agree with what you say. 

posted by C_C_T on November 12, 2010 at 2:51 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCRAKE
Sounds about right Wiley we are not optimistic like a certain lady who romanticizes problems.

posted by C_C_T on November 12, 2010 at 2:43 AM | link to this | reply

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If you say so Mystereo no offense ever taken

posted by C_C_T on November 12, 2010 at 2:40 AM | link to this | reply

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I think you always know what to say Sam. Thank you. 

posted by C_C_T on November 12, 2010 at 2:37 AM | link to this | reply

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Help, help, do you want to get me castigated E.E. Jane just writes what she wants to the same as UA. She will probably write one more and get tired of it any wood nymphs to spare.  

posted by C_C_T on November 12, 2010 at 2:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCAKE
As you say Bill

posted by C_C_T on November 12, 2010 at 2:26 AM | link to this | reply

CORNCAKE

{ She’s always a woman sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on November 11, 2010 at 10:58 PM | link to this | reply

 I like Jane ~ she is assertive and well, confident.  Now I wonder CC - is Jane your Muse?  This is absolutely great writing, Jane...and CC ~ E.E.

posted by elysianfields on November 11, 2010 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

I never know what to say; but, you entertain me so! I did not expect the close but it was fantastic! KUDOS!!! sam 

posted by sam444 on November 11, 2010 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

No Offense, this is pimping, the Mack. Great read great creativity great read!

posted by Mystereo on November 11, 2010 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCRAKE
Seems like you finally met a woman that matches ya old pard.

posted by WileyJohn on November 11, 2010 at 4:23 PM | link to this | reply

A Poem by Jane
Sometimes we all find fault in somethng or another and it brings about difficulty but, when you reach into your back pocket you might find the lint of time that clings to us like glue... You either shake it off or enjoy the moment. Interesting Fema

posted by fememefeme on November 11, 2010 at 4:10 PM | link to this | reply

Jane tells it like she sees it.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 11, 2010 at 3:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Come on Jane you aren't a tart, but be honest, you find him
Excuse me darling I know exactly what I want and I find him repulsive.

posted by C_C_T on November 11, 2010 at 12:20 PM | link to this | reply

Come on Jane you aren't a tart, but be honest, you find him
irresistible and you want exactly what he wants.

posted by Kabu on November 11, 2010 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply