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I have always been fascinated and inspired by the mountains. A very good portrayal of how they can affect people.
posted by
mariss9
on November 13, 2010 at 7:37 AM
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I think the closing couplet is very, very accurate! It is like a recipe for success for anyone! KUDOS! Sorry I am out late to get caught up but I have been battling a darn migraine! Love you! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on November 11, 2010 at 6:48 PM
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one can't stay there though, a person must alsobe able to
remember with pride and pleasure that wonderful time, without keeping on trying to recapture it.
posted by
Kabu
on November 11, 2010 at 11:01 AM
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And she is right :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 11, 2010 at 8:36 AM
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I love this!! The way you draw us through experience, thought and then the fabulous conclusion is fabulous!
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2010 at 8:02 AM
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she writes well, and describes in vivid detail. great job
posted by
Tzippy
on November 11, 2010 at 4:02 AM
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For me, living in flat East Anglia where we barely see a hill let alone a mountain, this is inspiring.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on November 11, 2010 at 2:18 AM
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Nicely constructed Shobana I guess nothing would be achieved without someone going beyond one's usual ambitions. Keep climbing. No rose today site playing up.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 10, 2010 at 11:50 PM
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New Heights
Beautifully written poem Shobana..
posted by
MsJudy
on November 10, 2010 at 11:06 PM
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I believe I believe and thank you Shobana for this lovely poem - inspiring and yes, rewarding as I go off onto bed and now, will have a good, restful sleep - maybe to dream of Mountains and climb into great proportions and deeper perspective - oh I do like this poem. Elyse
~ love ya' and your precious soul ~
posted by
elysianfields
on November 10, 2010 at 10:23 PM
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Re: Well done. shobana!
Hi Teddypoet, thanks so much.
posted by
shobana
on November 10, 2010 at 9:25 PM
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shobana
C It will do it love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 10, 2010 at 8:49 PM
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Well done. shobana!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 10, 2010 at 8:28 PM
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Shobana
Good one! And it reminds me that I sometimes act
before I think...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 10, 2010 at 7:25 PM
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Re: FormerStudentIntern I like this comment...I agree.
posted by
Kabu
on November 10, 2010 at 7:16 PM
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Our actions all start with a thought.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 10, 2010 at 6:58 PM
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PS--and maybe just this side of a prayer.
posted by
jfm32
on November 10, 2010 at 6:28 PM
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especially like "belittling its surroundings". Now about thought and action--now that's an idea potential in its possibilities, somehow made concrete within a language of a thought!
posted by
jfm32
on November 10, 2010 at 6:24 PM
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