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I hope everyone can see better once the smoke clears and learn something.
posted by
mariss9
on November 15, 2010 at 10:33 AM
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Makes me want to salute --- this is fantastic ~ free flowing and creative and patriotic and just alive!!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 12, 2010 at 8:46 PM
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I liked the presentation, too! Sometimes the less said is akin to enough said, this one does it up perfectly for me! War can be fragmented, and this helps one with that realization! I have a son headed for Afghanistan and I get the message perfectly! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 11, 2010 at 6:34 PM
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I like the fragmented nature of this, it gave an impression to me of being overwhelmed
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2010 at 7:06 AM
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Well it's explicit enough for the subject, I think.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 10, 2010 at 11:52 PM
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Seems to be the seeds of a good poem, and I like the impressions. But I'm also wondering what the possibilities would be if you connected some of the dots and arrived at a painting within a canvass.
posted by
jfm32
on November 10, 2010 at 6:41 PM
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