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Re: Rockingrector_retd
Thank you so much, I am delighted that you were able to identify with this
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2010 at 8:09 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Bill, often I write better under stress or when disturbed - I seem to work out my confusion on the page
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2010 at 8:02 AM
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Re: shobana
So do I
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2010 at 8:00 AM
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Re: when one is sitting on the edge and twilight seems to be enclosing
Thanks Kabu!
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2010 at 7:40 AM
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Re: eburns111
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2010 at 7:05 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2010 at 6:59 AM
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Re: This suggestedt to me
Thanks malcolm, tithe is a pretty unusual word these days, but it fit in most respects and I like the thought pattern there.
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2010 at 6:56 AM
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Re: Corncrake
vitamin B complex helps a lot with SAD, and the edge is the absolute best place to pray
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2010 at 6:44 AM
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Re: elysianfields
Thanks Elyse, I am delighted you like this one
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2010 at 6:39 AM
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This is good. It exactly describes that feeling of being on the edge of the abyss, and it ends with the hope offered by prayer.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on November 11, 2010 at 2:27 AM
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lionreign
C At wit’s end you write well. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 10, 2010 at 8:37 PM
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I believe prayers work miracles lionreign.
posted by
shobana
on November 10, 2010 at 7:04 PM
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when one is sitting on the edge and twilight seems to be enclosing
Prayer is the only thing to do...the best help there is.
posted by
Kabu
on November 10, 2010 at 5:09 PM
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the only way to feel at ease of what is on the edge is to pray
posted by
eburns111
on November 10, 2010 at 4:20 PM
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I so agree that at chasm's edge prayer is the answer! What striking imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 10, 2010 at 12:57 PM
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This suggestedt to me
a lonely person converting to become a monk in the Middle Ages. I think it was 'tithe' that set me off. Beautifully crafted as always
posted by
malcolm
on November 10, 2010 at 10:29 AM
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To stand on the edge and ponder. Always tomorrow Lion a little prayer helps at times. A lot of folk get Sad at this time of the year although the sunshine still helps. Nice poem
posted by
C_C_T
on November 10, 2010 at 10:15 AM
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yes, when on that edge - the precipice so dark, it is as you say, 'time to pray' ~ this bore the shades of abyss; the passion is read throughout. Stunning, LionR ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 10, 2010 at 8:26 AM
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