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Beautiful poem that expresses itself well.
posted by
mariposa75
on November 25, 2010 at 11:23 PM
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that woman can exit this hole of emptiness by looking in the mirror
and simply begining with "I love you" "I deserve to be happy" etc etc. suddenly the emptiness will disapear and in its place the life and energy she deserves will thrive and survive her dreams.
Still this poem is very strong, very well written and very powerful. you are very talented.
posted by
Tzippy
on November 11, 2010 at 3:56 AM
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Sinome
I certainly hope this sadness is not yours...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 10, 2010 at 7:54 PM
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What a sad feeling that must be Sinome. Excellent poem.
posted by
shobana
on November 10, 2010 at 7:19 PM
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Sinome
Beautifully written sadness luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 10, 2010 at 6:31 PM
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I don't I really look in the mirror.. I glaze my eyes and pretend I am
still 40. lol
posted by
Kabu
on November 10, 2010 at 5:28 PM
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great poem...did you read mine called Aging?....love your take on it
posted by
Annicita
on November 10, 2010 at 7:07 AM
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Oh sweetie, are you trying to make everybody cry? This is so beautifully heartbreaking xxxx
posted by
lionreign
on November 10, 2010 at 7:05 AM
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Sinome
Õ Certainly life is what it is. These are great images and symbols love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 9, 2010 at 10:13 PM
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It's amazing that we can survive it at all.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 9, 2010 at 7:01 PM
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totally gripping and very very sad
posted by
Ariala
on November 9, 2010 at 5:09 PM
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Surviving the emptiness...
You captured the mood very well. Well done.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 9, 2010 at 2:35 PM
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Haunting
yet totally real
posted by
malcolm
on November 9, 2010 at 1:45 PM
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A good poem Simone if a bit soul tearing, I hope that you do not feel like this as you write. One feels one is looking through your eyes into the sadness in the mirror.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 9, 2010 at 11:04 AM
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