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Thanks for your stories Lionreign. That one about the horse was interesting. I saw a video ages ago, where there was this person that looked across the room and then looked away, and everytime she looked back their cat would be nearer but just standing not walking. It was really strange to look at and your horse story reminded me of that. Thanks.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 15, 2010 at 6:07 PM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 8:22 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thanks Sam, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 8:20 AM
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Re: lionreign
thanks BC-A
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 8:19 AM
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Re: elysianfields
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 8:17 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Wiley!
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 8:14 AM
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Re: Hey this is great, especially with the Christmas Parades
You have parades? Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 8:12 AM
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Re: The Carnival Of Words
Thanks Cheerygirl
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 7:57 AM
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Re: shobana
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 7:56 AM
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Re: Mystereo
thank you - glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 7:55 AM
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Re: that parade ground
I am with you there, sometimes I say that something just fell out of my pen and that is often the better stuff I lay claim too, but I think those words just wrote themselves
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 7:51 AM
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Re: Corncrake
Oh yes... mine too... sometimes it's more like trying to get 30 toddlers round a department store...
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 7:48 AM
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This is just wonderful. Such a clever use of words, and so rhythmic.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on November 9, 2010 at 7:27 AM
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Re: written like a true writer :)
Thanks Tzippy
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 7:18 AM
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Re: As a lower-league wordsmith
Thank you so much but I would question "lower-league"
posted by
lionreign
on November 9, 2010 at 7:15 AM
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This is so awesome! Touche and bravo, too! Well done and the words and their placement made all the difference for me! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 8, 2010 at 11:54 PM
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lionreign
YR A great analysis of syllables. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 8, 2010 at 10:33 PM
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LionR ~ I could read this again and again - such fine cadence and rhythm...and on and on..this is GREAT!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 8, 2010 at 8:48 PM
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lionreign
Terrific mind you have my friend, very orderly and very creative
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 8, 2010 at 8:12 PM
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Hey this is great, especially with the Christmas Parades
happenening or about to happen Carnival of words ....just terrific.
posted by
Kabu
on November 8, 2010 at 7:28 PM
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The Carnival Of Words
A fun read.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 8, 2010 at 6:57 PM
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sure is a carnival of syllables lionreign. fantastic poem and thank you for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on November 8, 2010 at 6:15 PM
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This is a deep a very creative read, attention, forward, march!! Nice.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 8, 2010 at 2:43 PM
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that parade ground
CC said it better than I could. Mine can be an unruly troop at times; other times (and don't ask how this happens!) they have better ideas than I do.
posted by
2902
on November 8, 2010 at 11:50 AM
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Yes very apt Lion sometimes they don't want to come out on parade, but I like the idea.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 8, 2010 at 11:19 AM
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written like a true writer :)
posted by
Tzippy
on November 8, 2010 at 10:33 AM
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As a lower-league wordsmith
I absolutely loved this. It's one thing to have such a great imagination but to be able to articulate it in this way is awesome.
posted by
malcolm
on November 8, 2010 at 9:06 AM
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