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thank you E.E. back to the grindstone 

posted by C_C_T on November 9, 2010 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Lion be lucky

posted by C_C_T on November 9, 2010 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply

 Yes, superb writing here.  I like all the imagery - it makes me stop - think a minute - and yes, read again.  CC ~ Your poetry is such a delight and treat to find.  EE

posted by elysianfields on November 8, 2010 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with Sam, the close was a moment of genius in an otherwise great poem - bravo!

posted by lionreign on November 8, 2010 at 7:50 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Sam. Hope you are OK 

posted by C_C_T on November 8, 2010 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

We should feel as they felt at the time! I adore this! The close was just perfect! sam 

posted by sam444 on November 8, 2010 at 1:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCAKE
I have heard about that Bill thank you for reminding me.

posted by C_C_T on November 8, 2010 at 12:06 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you eburns pleased you think so.

posted by C_C_T on November 8, 2010 at 12:04 AM | link to this | reply

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Lo Shobana Thank you for calling hope you are OK.

posted by C_C_T on November 8, 2010 at 12:03 AM | link to this | reply

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F.S True FS but one cannot live in the past it has happened full stop,

posted by C_C_T on November 7, 2010 at 11:59 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I am sure that an old charmer like you has all the hopefull
I think you would find that they think I don't need anything I think when I think about it. It makes one think. Still thinking Kabu.

posted by C_C_T on November 7, 2010 at 11:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCRAKE
No Sir just need a lot of them. Thank you Wiley. 

posted by C_C_T on November 7, 2010 at 11:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Well crafted
Thank you malcolm it happens.

posted by C_C_T on November 7, 2010 at 11:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: great poem very touching and honest
Thank you Tzippy it is always a great help

posted by C_C_T on November 7, 2010 at 11:51 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CC
yes do that Femia I take it your affection lasts longer than a chocolate    

posted by C_C_T on November 7, 2010 at 11:50 PM | link to this | reply

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Hm Simone I need to do it to write the poem one cannot squeeze tears out of a screen. It is always circumstances and wondering.

posted by C_C_T on November 7, 2010 at 11:45 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCAKE

Û Love sees the writing on the world. It causes blindness sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on November 7, 2010 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

great imangination

posted by eburns111 on November 7, 2010 at 8:46 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely CC..melancholic and true. Thank you for stopping by.

posted by shobana on November 7, 2010 at 5:09 PM | link to this | reply

So sad it is at times when those memories become just, memories.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 7, 2010 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

I am sure that an old charmer like you has all the hopefull
ladies keeping your larder full of biscuits and cakes and all types of goodies...no  need for day dream ladies me thinks. Now Uncle Albert...well that old rogue is a different kettle of fish!

posted by Kabu on November 7, 2010 at 2:38 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCRAKE
Well now a woman of make-believe sure won't upset your finances or space my friend.

posted by WileyJohn on November 7, 2010 at 2:08 PM | link to this | reply

Well crafted
and rings true.

posted by malcolm on November 7, 2010 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

great poem very touching and honest

posted by Tzippy on November 7, 2010 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

CC
Is a line forming to get to you or does one have a chance with your romantic endeavors ? I think I will enjoy this one piece of chocolate and think of how sweet the sender to allow me this moment to enjoy. Fema

posted by fememefeme on November 7, 2010 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

Excellently done CC... I guess we have all re-lived past memories... created images that help us visualize what we loved and feel it again... but why does a man like you , with all that romance inside needs to do such a thing I will never understand... women should be tripping themselves  to get to you :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on November 7, 2010 at 8:18 AM | link to this | reply