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Fortunate you had  wake up call before anything serious happened.  Memory lane can be a strange place, but good to visit. 

posted by mariss9 on November 9, 2010 at 10:54 AM | link to this | reply

 powerful --- it brings tears to my eyes, Mystereo ~ passionate - Elyse

posted by elysianfields on November 8, 2010 at 9:03 PM | link to this | reply

great poem and the very end says it all, the impact of it is wonderful!

posted by lionreign on November 8, 2010 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

Great one Mysterio :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on November 7, 2010 at 9:03 PM | link to this | reply

a flashback of the good and the bad, some to remember others we would like to forget

posted by eburns111 on November 7, 2010 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

Very intriguing mystereo, thanks so much for stopping by.

posted by shobana on November 7, 2010 at 5:18 PM | link to this | reply

dark and well done!!!

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on November 7, 2010 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

Baby Mystereo
That comment made by baby Mystereo made me smile ha ha. I'm glad you are enjoying my blog as much as I am enjoying yours. That was huge that grasshopper, I wouldn't want anyone to get a shock like that after experiencing it myself. There are some strange and wacky creatures out  there that's for sure.

posted by Cheerygirl on November 7, 2010 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

as I read this tale called life, chills began to form up and down
my spine, moments that change a direction of a life are the points we are guided to experience for a higher purpose. You told it simply and powerfully and I was touched.

posted by Tzippy on November 7, 2010 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

R Suspense at an early age led to a moral now. It’s a poem that grows up as it goes love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on November 7, 2010 at 12:48 AM | link to this | reply

It is easy to walk the the straight and narrow if one has everything but I can feel for that young person, I wonder how many took the other route. Good poem 

posted by C_C_T on November 7, 2010 at 12:10 AM | link to this | reply

Vivid childhood memories of events that changed our lives forever..
are God's reminders, best wishes, Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on November 6, 2010 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

VISIT
Intersting reading Mystereo.

posted by Cheerygirl on November 6, 2010 at 5:09 AM | link to this | reply

WOW! This was so real and I could feel the fright prior to the accident! The lessons learned in youth make the close all that more compelling! Incredibly engaging imagery! I was glued to every word! sam 

posted by sam444 on November 6, 2010 at 4:28 AM | link to this | reply