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Sinome
So lovely and peaceful an ending, "I just walk and I am home." I enjoyed that feeling of safety luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 6, 2010 at 3:20 PM
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"Embryo of God, sliding through eternity"...only you Sinome..
are capable of visualizing such deep truths, let alone expressing them poetically. - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 6, 2010 at 7:25 AM
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Sinome
· Indeed being near the water renews our lives love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 5, 2010 at 9:36 PM
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This was so realI feltthe soothing sea on my own feet the damp on my face
and the wet sand. I had to look at my feet to be sure that they were dry.
posted by
Kabu
on November 5, 2010 at 9:22 PM
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It'll be nice when it does officially stop.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 5, 2010 at 5:33 PM
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oh this is a wonderland of imagery and senses ~~~ yes sensual to the max. I so enjoyed this outpouring from your heart, Sinome. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 5, 2010 at 1:50 PM
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Nice Simone hauntingly recording a time like this.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 1:20 PM
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I'm home
Lovely. I enjoyed it a lot.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 5, 2010 at 1:05 PM
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