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This poem sounds to me like you are describing a real writer's block -and you waded through it, to come out and swim in the colors of your imagination once more. Great imagery!
posted by
adnohr
on November 6, 2010 at 7:42 PM
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Re: Alone.
Thank you CG don't want to go there too often
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 1:52 PM
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You are right there Taps it's how we were made.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 1:51 PM
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Thank you Lion time will tell
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 1:49 PM
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Alone.
Good imagery. I could see you walking...
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 5, 2010 at 1:01 PM
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as a 'moment' --- and you wrote it well ---
you can borrow my tree CC~: 
~ Sing out with that voice of yours. Powerful. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on November 5, 2010 at 12:02 PM
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Imagination is a fascinating thing and especially so because no two persons' are the same.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 5, 2010 at 10:55 AM
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such effective desolate imagery, I am glad that it ended with success
posted by
lionreign
on November 5, 2010 at 8:40 AM
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Re: This resonated strongly with me
Thank you Malcom I guess we all feel like it at times
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 12:46 AM
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Thank you Mystereo one doesn't want to hang around in those places too long
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 12:44 AM
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Yes that would not be a pretty sight F.S.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 12:42 AM
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Thank you Sam I hope you are feeling OK for a while until you can get your treatment
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 12:41 AM
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Re: CC
Lo Femia I get the image all but the sunny morning. I'll play with your words promise not to be rough.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 12:39 AM
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Re: CORNCRAKE
You were so lucky Wiley But I don't need to tell you that
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 12:33 AM
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Re: This brought a lump to my throat it is really sad...walking through the
Yes OK Kabu I must say U.A. takes a lot of stick for me
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 12:32 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
I expect so Bill no one is unique.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 5, 2010 at 12:30 AM
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CORNCAKE
j ü I’ve had this experience sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 4, 2010 at 9:00 PM
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This brought a lump to my throat it is really sad...walking through the
lonely desert of your mind untilthe edge of what.....but then there is blogit friendship waiting to enfold you; and Uncle Albert waiting to get out of control and one never knows when friend Kabu may write about Gnomes!!!!!!1 So don't feel lonely, open up the computer and lose yourself in our troubles.
posted by
Kabu
on November 4, 2010 at 8:07 PM
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CORNCRAKE
I could really identify with that 'Alone' and you captured the emptiness and seemed to over come it. I did that when I found Kabu, your poem is a grand expression my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 4, 2010 at 7:15 PM
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CC
Take an asprin and go to bed tomorrow will bring a new day so rest your mind and think of me hugging you with kisses to awake with a bouquet of bloomed flowers standing on your dresser next to the windows sunny day. Nice to play with word only our mind can do to enjoy. Fema coffees ready!
posted by
fememefeme
on November 4, 2010 at 6:58 PM
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Sterling close! And it was laden with incredible imagery throughout! I had a lot of favorite lines; the kind that ring true and awaken my senses! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 4, 2010 at 5:32 PM
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It's amazing all of that intensity inside one's body does not make one literally combust.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 4, 2010 at 5:08 PM
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Great and deep read, realizing that the loneliness is broken!
posted by
Mystereo
on November 4, 2010 at 4:38 PM
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This resonated strongly with me
and you built up the dramatic tension really well I thought
posted by
malcolm
on November 4, 2010 at 4:00 PM
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