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What reflection! I liked how you set it up using nature; the rainbow was rather striking! Then it went a bit melancholy but I liked the message, we need to enjoy the moments as they come and carpe diem, and then remembrance is fond! I did think of this as being a fond memory in poetic verse! I am finally getting out to read! I have been working to get my place winterized and it is just wearing me out! The place only seems big when I have to get things done before the blustery weather is upon us! I have a month but the rainy season is here and it can get a bit muddy and damp! How is your winterizing coming along? sam
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sam444
on November 4, 2010 at 5:30 PM
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Thank you Simone it is sweet that you think so
posted by
C_C_T
on November 4, 2010 at 8:49 AM
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Ah... yes, wishing for what has past is sweet most times... Your poem is wonderful :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 4, 2010 at 8:34 AM
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Re: Haunting and pure..
Thank you Kate I hope that you feel hopeful today, it is nice of you to make the effort.
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C_C_T
on November 3, 2010 at 11:39 PM
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Sadly they all are at the time FS
posted by
C_C_T
on November 3, 2010 at 11:36 PM
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Thank you Bill I'm bottling It up before you lose it
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C_C_T
on November 3, 2010 at 11:35 PM
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Haunting and pure..
Touches the heart true. Incredible poem..
posted by
Kate07
on November 3, 2010 at 7:43 PM
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That love was the be all, end all.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 3, 2010 at 7:11 PM
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CORNCAKE
R I see the rainbow sun and feel the sand. I wish with you for time sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on November 3, 2010 at 3:23 PM
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CC ---
I hear apples and bananas are good for the gloom too... I do like - I don't mean to tread on your 'gloom' and sadness because it touched me very. and sardines? yum...now you've made me hungry... EE
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elysianfields
on November 3, 2010 at 11:50 AM
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This gloomy mood E.E. I shall have to have a few more sardines for tea fish oil etc. Never mind as long as you liked it
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C_C_T
on November 3, 2010 at 11:47 AM
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Goodness Femia that would be an experience I wonder what the perfume would be Mischief?
posted by
C_C_T
on November 3, 2010 at 11:32 AM
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Re: a wonderful view from the mind's eye.
A very nice expression Ms Straightforward thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on November 3, 2010 at 11:29 AM
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Thank you Lion it happens as you know.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 3, 2010 at 11:27 AM
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Thank you Shobana for your bubbly comment keep your eyes shut.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 3, 2010 at 11:25 AM
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CC - one of my all time favorites (among many) of yours. This is one of those. Very touching and yes as Lion states, as tragic or more, heartrending. This has touched me. Reminds me of seasons leaving - blossoms unfurling into 'expire' and of a relationship that ended... EE
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elysianfields
on November 3, 2010 at 10:52 AM
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CC
Be careful where you go with your eyes closed you might run into a pole or a lovely lady holding flowers and the peddals might fall down for your to catch as the fragrance of her perfume mesmerize your thoughts. FEma
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fememefeme
on November 3, 2010 at 9:16 AM
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a wonderful view from the mind's eye.
posted by
Straightforward
on November 3, 2010 at 8:27 AM
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vivid, brilliant and tragic. This is a great poem!
posted by
lionreign
on November 3, 2010 at 7:43 AM
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Such beauty in this poem CC and when one shuts the eyes the love just bloom and grows. Lovely and thank you for the visit. Glad you liked the poem.
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shobana
on November 3, 2010 at 1:22 AM
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