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You could make the work of a simple broom dance in a poetic frolic. Lovely as usual.
posted by
Justi
on November 3, 2010 at 12:47 PM
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Sinome
That is so poetically perfect, you have me wanting to go and greet the dark right now luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 2, 2010 at 9:12 PM
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what a dear little poem....you make me want to pop off to bed and snuggle
down intothe warmth and sleep.
posted by
Kabu
on November 2, 2010 at 8:02 PM
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I'm loving the personification.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 2, 2010 at 7:29 PM
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my trusted friend
Interesting...
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 2, 2010 at 5:49 PM
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This took me for a loop the ending killing me softly, deep read.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 2, 2010 at 2:48 PM
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Teasingly beautiful Simone you are spreading passion like butter on crumpets.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 2, 2010 at 1:40 PM
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Lovely and lingering work
posted by
Kate07
on November 2, 2010 at 12:34 PM
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This is as a painting ~ light and shadows, friendly. Very keen and thoughtful poem. Beautiful Sinome...xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 2, 2010 at 12:31 PM
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