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~ very touching!!! poignant and deep, Spider. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 5, 2010 at 1:53 PM
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what pain and sorrow in your eyes
Great poem. Very enjoyable.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 2, 2010 at 4:37 PM
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You are so gifted at this type of poetry, i could never sustain the thread so long or do it so well
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:49 AM
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Sad to say lauren I didn't know what to buy from the Kleeneasy man so I bought a bottle of spider deterrent, just a passing thought not poisonous made of horse, conkers to you. Quite an intense piece of poetry, I wonder where this is going or are we just going to be left dangling on on one of your threads. Hope you feel better,
posted by
C_C_T
on November 2, 2010 at 7:17 AM
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I loved this poem spiderfly especially the one where it says not to play with heartstrings. Awesome. Thank you so much for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on November 1, 2010 at 9:22 PM
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Awesome imagery! I thought it to be rather poignant that it was the same as a year prior, makes me ponder my own existence! Great thought provoking poem, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 1, 2010 at 6:58 PM
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