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the 'if' s have won out, my heart is thumping a thump. This is adoring and precious and dear to boot. Lovely writing as always, my Sinome ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on November 2, 2010 at 12:30 PM
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This is pure enchantment, I love it! xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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Sinome
Y That’s love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 1, 2010 at 9:28 PM
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Very lovely poem Sinome, I'm sure many have had those thoughts sometime. Thanks so much for stopping by.
posted by
shobana
on November 1, 2010 at 9:25 PM
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A powerful if that many have felt.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 1, 2010 at 5:41 PM
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the untried love or first love....a lovely what may have been in verse.
posted by
Kabu
on November 1, 2010 at 5:30 PM
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met you first
CC's right again everyone feels this way. It,s "The Road Not Taken" in a different vein. I once read that anyone we meet of the opposite sex is ALWAYS sized up - however unconsciously - as a possible mate. I think that's true, but you have written a young woman's poem, and it's quite beautiful and touching.
posted by
2902
on November 1, 2010 at 2:31 PM
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Well Simone I don't think you mean this for one second it is a very emotive poem if you had met someone else things might be far worse. You might not have your lovely grandchildren you may not have even felt like writing your beautiful poetry. We all probably have these feelings. Goodness I feel I am becoming a councillor. I had better shut up
posted by
C_C_T
on November 1, 2010 at 12:00 PM
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