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Re: Sam444
it certainly can, it took many years to realise that silence is often worse than the wrong words.
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 8:04 AM
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Re: BC-A
They usually do in some form...
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 8:00 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you so much sweetie, she has raised similar concerns... xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:57 AM
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Re: lionreign
wow, thanks Wiley I am touched by all the positive comments I am getting today...
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:54 AM
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Re: The Words
thank you Cheerygirl
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:50 AM
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Re: spiderfly
well they might say something other than what i intended
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:49 AM
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Re: shobana
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:44 AM
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Re: lionreign, I was thinking just as Kabu.....
Thanks so much Rumor
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:40 AM
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Re: dear friend...you never ever get the words wrong.
thanks Kabu, I'm glad to hear it... but I might get them wrong next time, you know...
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:34 AM
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O yes; the fear of getting the words wrong can stymie one! Awesome imagery throughout, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 2, 2010 at 7:31 AM
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Re: I love the sense of
wow, thanks malcolm, I am flattered
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:27 AM
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Re: Corncrake
Thank you, I think that if a poem is made to look easy and relaxed then it is at least well written enough to hide all the work that went into it
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:18 AM
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Re: lovely
Thanks Bob, perhaps that's because the tendency of young lovers is to show themselves as godlike... or maybe it's because vulnerability is always appealing (in small doses)
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:15 AM
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Re: Nita09
Thanks for your visit
posted by
lionreign
on November 2, 2010 at 7:11 AM
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TAPS
Y Feelings make up your lines. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on November 1, 2010 at 9:50 PM
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The only problem that girl will have when you finally get together will be to live up to the image you have painted of her... Your love is just perfect my friend and in your poems you express it so beautifully that I can not imagine anyone lucky enough to be the inspiration for them not melting when they read them... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 1, 2010 at 8:43 PM
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lionreign
You couldn't ever get the words wrong from what I've read of your wonderful poetry my friend...
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 1, 2010 at 7:39 PM
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The Words
Beautiful. So lovely Lionreign...
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 1, 2010 at 5:18 PM
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words are never wrong, they just say more.....
posted by
spiderfly
on November 1, 2010 at 4:39 PM
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Beautiful poem, thanks so much for the visit lionreign.
posted by
shobana
on November 1, 2010 at 4:21 PM
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lionreign, I was thinking just as Kabu.....
You need never worry about getting the words wrong..
.....:)
posted by
Rumor
on November 1, 2010 at 1:32 PM
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dear friend...you never ever get the words wrong.
posted by
Kabu
on November 1, 2010 at 12:14 PM
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I love the sense of
vulnerability here and it resonates with me a good deal. I can't imagine your choice or connection of words could ever be wrong though - they are usually nothing short of miraculous in my view.
posted by
malcolm
on November 1, 2010 at 11:10 AM
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No you won't get them wrong Lion a nice easy going poem I like the way you just say it easily not so easy to write though, but nothing is easily achieved. Well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 1, 2010 at 9:14 AM
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lovely
Good poem! Funny, but nothing's as adequate (and more!) in a love poem as the confession of inadequacy!
posted by
2902
on November 1, 2010 at 9:12 AM
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Nita09
on November 1, 2010 at 8:45 AM
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