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posted by
Nita09
on November 1, 2010 at 8:53 AM
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sorry you didn't gain, hope you have learned, even if the hard way, better than not learning at all
posted by
eburns111
on October 31, 2010 at 5:39 PM
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I agree with Elise. Nothing sad about a learning experience, or the warmth of wisdom. As usual, great write.
posted by
jfm32
on October 31, 2010 at 5:04 PM
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So much sadness I sense in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 31, 2010 at 3:50 PM
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Sorrowful yet so lovely..
posted by
Kate07
on October 31, 2010 at 2:52 PM
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Sinome
What a lovely, sad and nostalgic poem...It's a reminder of past loves for all of us, I'm sure...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 31, 2010 at 2:24 PM
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Kind of true in a way I think Simone although you were never one to dominate and it might have been construed as innocence. lovely poem
posted by
C_C_T
on October 31, 2010 at 11:32 AM
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once upon a time
Very lovely and haunting! I get blase sometimes and feel I've seen everything love poems can say, but then poems like this come along - wonderful work!
posted by
2902
on October 31, 2010 at 11:23 AM
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Once
posted by
2902
on October 31, 2010 at 11:19 AM
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Sinome
" But walks go better together love. BC-A, Bill’s R""st
posted by
BC-A
on October 31, 2010 at 10:55 AM
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Sinome, I read of cold wind, deserted streets ~ chill and isolation - but oh the memories carried and the wisdom in the innocence seemingly protected reveals only the soul of 'warmth'. Beautiful writing, vivid and potent. Elyse
xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on October 31, 2010 at 10:46 AM
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