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posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 4, 2010 at 1:53 PM
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A Castle
Yep, reading it again. It's such a lovely poem.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 27, 2010 at 3:35 PM
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Re: A Castle
wow, that is the greatest compliment of all. Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on November 3, 2010 at 11:00 AM
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A Castle
Back again... This is such a lovely poem. I can't help reading it again and again and again...
posted by
Cheerygirl
on November 2, 2010 at 2:53 PM
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Re: You have dreamed a perfect castle
Absolutely, I feel no need for such things, they seem to just get in the way of people being people
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 8:16 AM
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Re: In other words, a dream castle.
A dream, a wish or maybe a metaphor...
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 8:13 AM
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Re: shobana
Thank you so much!
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 8:12 AM
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Re: elysianfields
thank you, my friend, without freedom I think all else is meaningless
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 8:09 AM
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Re: Enticing and bewitching
thanks malcolm!
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 8:07 AM
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Re: Rockingrector_retd
thank you! I think you do...
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 8:06 AM
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Re: lionreign...
Thanks Rumor, I hope so... a castle is always more fun when filled
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 8:03 AM
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Re: lionreign
thank you Bill, that is a fabulous thing to say - I may steal that for future inspiration
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 8:01 AM
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Re: She can't possibly resist this
I hope not
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 7:59 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Wiley, I do my best
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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Re: Sam444
thanks Sam, I think without choice it is less the castle and more the prison, don't you?
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 7:56 AM
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Re: Ride Of The Valkyrie
Thanks Cheerygirl, I enjoyed the thought of that too
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 7:55 AM
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Re: TAPS
thank you! I always imagined them as grim and unwelcoming from the outside and filled with thick rugs and huge fires inside.... (except for the Italian and Spanish ones which were cool and elegant inside)
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 7:39 AM
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Re: A Castle
thank you so much Cheerygirl, I am delighted you enjoyed it so much
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 7:32 AM
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Re: eburns111
thank you
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 7:27 AM
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Re: spiderfly
thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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Re: Corncrake
Thank you, I often use my poetry to explore things which are on my mind...
posted by
lionreign
on November 1, 2010 at 7:08 AM
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You have dreamed a perfect castle
and you have furnished it perfectly--not a single flat-screen tv, no trappings of material wealth. It is a palace for the heart and soul.
posted by
Randir
on October 31, 2010 at 12:23 PM
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In other words, a dream castle.
posted by
Straightforward
on October 31, 2010 at 4:48 AM
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Absolutely gorgeous Lionreign...felt like I was moving into that Castle. Thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on October 31, 2010 at 1:50 AM
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LionR I like the freedom you offer and all else ~ it's Good! - Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 30, 2010 at 3:59 PM
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Enticing and bewitching
posted by
malcolm
on October 30, 2010 at 11:45 AM
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I love your castle and want to come there - but I guess I have one too...
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on October 30, 2010 at 10:26 AM
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lionreign...
you make that castle sound so very inviting, I don't think any visitor would want to leave...although you leave one with the freedom to come and go as they please..
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posted by
Rumor
on October 30, 2010 at 8:12 AM
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lionreign
R Dreams work as building blocks of the future. Lol. ! BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 30, 2010 at 12:16 AM
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She can't possibly resist this
posted by
Kabu
on October 29, 2010 at 8:33 PM
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lionreign
You make that castle very inviting my friend.......
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 29, 2010 at 6:47 PM
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A fortress indeed that is of the pleasant variety! I like how the enticement is presented but the choice is left up to the beholder! How very endearing! I loved how it was finely woven of glorious imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 29, 2010 at 4:10 PM
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Ride Of The Valkyrie
My husband and I laughed and laughed imagining you going away and leaving that on repeat. The first two or three times they might have thought it was great to listen to, but by the time the weekend was over they'd be climbing the walls ha ha very funny.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 29, 2010 at 3:43 PM
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I often think of castles as cold, lonely places, of stern character, and yearning of its inhabitant to go to sunny climes. Not so in your poem. You make your castle most welcoming.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 29, 2010 at 3:10 PM
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A Castle
Well if she hasn't packed her bags and arrived on your door step, to live you for ever as her prince charming then you should check if she's actually read this poem... Great poem! I love all of it, but that last line wow.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 29, 2010 at 2:52 PM
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great write
posted by
eburns111
on October 29, 2010 at 2:02 PM
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this is one of the best, I just so love it
posted by
spiderfly
on October 29, 2010 at 1:31 PM
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Very good Lion it is about thinking of a theme and then working on it all your poems lately have been increasingly thoughtful
posted by
C_C_T
on October 29, 2010 at 1:25 PM
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