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Touche~~~ the action is in the mind! Awesome imagery throughout! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 26, 2010 at 2:35 PM
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CC ~ this bears repeating. (I had written my response to your comment here and I think I accidentally sent into outer space instead of to blogit...sorry if this is repetitive) However...I sometimes wonder what a reaction to a read will be yes. And when I wonder, after I submit, I smile thinking no matter - I know what my intentions and thoughts were meant to be and sometimes other's even enlighten me (as you often do) with their comments and it's a Ahhh moment. I enjoy this about writing and art and photography. About responses here and the consistency or the amount etc...I cannot pay attention to that because life gets busy for most (I know this and you as well). Effort and design, intention and fruits ~ you know, again I enjoy the effort I give towards each write, photo, art piece etc...and I know
you do as well --- I am so happy you will consider staying another year (and tonight when DMan arrives home he will know of my delight...LOL ~ because I share most of your writings and your photos at the opportunity and DMan enjoys your keen and wonderful sense of life - he likes your poetry and photos ~ he just will not join yet..., you know his occupation keeps him rather busy and he won't begin to offer this time yet...maybe when he retires)...Your writings have improved wonderfully. I think you've lost that novel approach - kind of 'feeling your way' through this blog-it thing. Yes, I believe you found your Voice ...I had to do the same. WRiTE ON! my dear Gardener Poet - you've so much yet to broach - to add - to inspire -etc and et al ~ EE and ee ~
(excuse the lengthy comment dear Sir but me and conversation are friends)
posted by
elysianfields
on October 26, 2010 at 11:37 AM
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Do you know E.E. I don't know if you feel the same but I always wonder what the reaction will be. Sometimes I have posted what I think is quite good and barely get a response. I know most people are over generous with responses and one must not ever fall into the trap of thinking I can't improve. Nethertheless we are all human and like a little boost for our effort and I really do think it inspires one to continue I have noticed those who stick it do improve remarkably, but of course it sometimes lead to a blank wall. I wish when I first started I had been more conservative with the poems I had written, but I only thought I was going to run for 1 year. It looks like I shall have to keep going a bit longer.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 26, 2010 at 10:57 AM
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Thank you Malcom I can't quite remenber what it was but I will check it later.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 26, 2010 at 10:43 AM
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Thank you Lion I have time to watch these days
posted by
C_C_T
on October 26, 2010 at 10:41 AM
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CC ~ I have read this a few times and you know, will most likely read again and have marked to my favorites. WOW, such passion. You must have watched a bee from time to time. and of the pollen --- the depth and the division of --- well, this is just simply inspiring to me as a poet, photographer and artist, you make me want to reach deeper. CC - this bears imagery and of heart divine. EE
(and yes, probably my response is emotional but oh I just am okay with emotions)
posted by
elysianfields
on October 26, 2010 at 9:44 AM
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Wonderful
especially the last line of the first verse!
posted by
malcolm
on October 26, 2010 at 8:31 AM
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What a fabulous poem! I could just see the bee and the flower - bravo!
posted by
lionreign
on October 26, 2010 at 7:54 AM
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If it had been me I would have put a drop of honey in the flower Femia, but then I suppose it might stick it's beak together, probably better to leave nature alone.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 25, 2010 at 11:36 PM
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Re: your poem is very passionate and seductive.
You say the nicest things Kabu perhaps you didn't notice it in your garden, I'll remind you next year
posted by
C_C_T
on October 25, 2010 at 11:31 PM
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Thank you Shobana not much action this morning too frosty.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 25, 2010 at 11:29 PM
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Well Wiley you should put a copyright on that name it might be handy for some kind of tablet one day.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 25, 2010 at 11:24 PM
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Hm I wonder csherloc poor little fellow has to take it back to the council nest every hour or so
posted by
C_C_T
on October 25, 2010 at 11:21 PM
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Well it does show the quality of the visitors Taps they are all being sweet about it. Oh I've just seen your joke Honey
posted by
C_C_T
on October 25, 2010 at 11:19 PM
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Yes very funny Femia. Not much use being a flatpack with wings Buzz buzz.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 25, 2010 at 11:16 PM
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Thank you FS . It is only 7am here and I have a job to think what they are
posted by
C_C_T
on October 25, 2010 at 11:12 PM
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Very strange Bill what a sweet way to spend an evening.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 25, 2010 at 11:08 PM
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CORNCAKE
' It’s fascinating how thoughts are like flowers sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 25, 2010 at 9:59 PM
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You touch upon the five senses so well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 25, 2010 at 8:11 PM
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CC
I'm visiting your sight again for I remembered a story of a Bee who married a door bell and they had a little Humdinger. Funny! Love your seduction.Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on October 25, 2010 at 8:02 PM
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Reminds me of the old joke, "Why do bees buzz?".
Just in case you don't remember it, the answer is:
"You'd buzz too if someone stole your honey and nectar."
posted by
TAPS.
on October 25, 2010 at 6:41 PM
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The things you do with words C.C. When a man seduces a woman, he gives something up, when the bee seduces the flower,he gets nectar----- what a lucky bee LOL
posted by
csherloc
on October 25, 2010 at 6:39 PM
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CORNCRAKE
They may name a drink after this one, like Sexual Stinger.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 25, 2010 at 6:20 PM
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Lovely CC and wonderfully thought out as you used the bee and flower as your seductive subject. Thanks so much for the visit and the flower looks great as always.
posted by
shobana
on October 25, 2010 at 4:18 PM
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your poem is very passionate and seductive.
posted by
Kabu
on October 25, 2010 at 2:26 PM
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CC
Nice poem. I saw a humming bird trying to pollinate one of my silk flowers around the water fall. When he found out I guess it wasn't what he thought he decided to take a drink of water from the water. It made me smile as your poem. Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on October 25, 2010 at 12:20 PM
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