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Sunday, October 24, 2010 brain dead,
You don't sound brain dead to me. Great poem.

posted by Cheerygirl on October 26, 2010 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

Well I'm still waiting lauren, times money as you know. 

posted by C_C_T on October 26, 2010 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

The story of our lives, whatever it is soon passes, a new day, a new time.

posted by csherloc on October 25, 2010 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

That was yesterday and of today?  this is poignant; well written ~ Elyse 

posted by elysianfields on October 25, 2010 at 7:16 AM | link to this | reply

cc...wonderful!!!!

posted by spiderfly on October 24, 2010 at 10:25 PM | link to this | reply

distinctive

posted by eburns111 on October 24, 2010 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

I like your poem.  

posted by Cheerygirl on October 24, 2010 at 5:03 PM | link to this | reply

Come on Lauren I hope it isn't that bad I expect it is the reaction to all the moving it gits the adrenaline up and then you git a little set back. I think the trouble today lauren is that there is not much motive to do anything really. If anyone lived in a shack and had to go wooding and perhaps net a fish from that silver river and watch out for the wolves etc.

Come on we'll have a walk down to the splurge, just have a quick look at it do you think it is all the cooking oil that you have thrown away, my goodness I didn't realize it went out that far I thought it was just a gold fish type pool. Is that wench supposed to be here The knight has probably gone back to the round table. She has got pretty feet, perhaps we should build her a little shelter on this sandy beach. Now you run along and bake some cakes, I expect she's got a tale or two up her jumper.     

posted by C_C_T on October 24, 2010 at 12:40 PM | link to this | reply