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Those dreams are wonderful.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 23, 2010 at 5:24 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful, especially because of the 'hope' of holding hands at the end. How very loving
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 23, 2010 at 4:22 PM
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my hand too
Afantastic poem. I loved it. You carried me away
posted by
RoseyP
on October 23, 2010 at 2:49 PM
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put your hand in mine and lets dream again....how I would love to walk the
beach with you dear friend and do just that.
posted by
Kabu
on October 23, 2010 at 12:15 PM
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Sonome
I Agree with Elisa I to make it a favorite write of yours done from the soul..Time will tell the story. Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on October 23, 2010 at 9:50 AM
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Sinome ~ your descriptive quality in this one indeed is stunning. I mark this as one of my favorites of yours. So tender and wistful and moved me. Elyse 
posted by
elysianfields
on October 23, 2010 at 9:20 AM
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Quite interesting Simone you seem in this poem to make the past more relevant than the present, which I suppose it could be as I suspect you can picture it all vividly. Very nicely written with a tear I expect.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 22, 2010 at 11:13 PM
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