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You see Shobana if I were being naughty I would say Hi soft lips. I am now a reformed character as I have found someone to fetch my pension. Mind it doesn't last long spending it on red hot curry. Glad you like the photo.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 24, 2010 at 12:19 AM
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Re: New Comment on Butterflies
Hm CG I don't think I could afford to go these days what with the price of candles and digestion tablets. Better to stick a couple of candles on the table and open a tin of sardines.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 24, 2010 at 12:13 AM
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Hi CC, I had red hot curry, burned my lips and now I shall remember this poem. Thanks so much for the visit and the flowers are exquisite.
posted by
shobana
on October 23, 2010 at 9:32 PM
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New Comment on Butterflies
I wouldn't go there."'Praying around white candles.." I would think he would need to go and fetch a priest. It sounds like the place needs an exorcism.
Well if you start seeing things like that after you've eaten something, I'd definitely change restaurants and not eat that dish again.... 
posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 23, 2010 at 5:13 PM
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Re: Blue butterflies and red-hot curry - what a combo!
It makes one think Ms Straightforward, Thank you for calling
posted by
C_C_T
on October 23, 2010 at 6:27 AM
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Blue butterflies and red-hot curry - what a combo!
posted by
Straightforward
on October 23, 2010 at 2:51 AM
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Thank you Simone I know you would have ended it sweetly.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 23, 2010 at 12:11 AM
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Yes FS in the stomach sometimes
posted by
C_C_T
on October 23, 2010 at 12:08 AM
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Re: Amazing.
Thank you LG I hope you will find a bit of relief from your writing thank you for calling
posted by
C_C_T
on October 23, 2010 at 12:07 AM
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Re: This is so great...
That's the way to do it Justi, I know you love to keep busy as I do, but I guess when one is brought up to work it is a job to shake it off. Thank you for calling.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 23, 2010 at 12:04 AM
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Re: CORNCRAKE
Two butterflies Wiley I like the way they flutter by Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 22, 2010 at 11:59 PM
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Thank you csherloc It is nice to hear you say that.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 22, 2010 at 11:57 PM
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Well Sam can't make a silk purse out of a pig's ear or can one?
posted by
C_C_T
on October 22, 2010 at 11:55 PM
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Thank you E.E. I have to remind myself sometimes to wake up and smell the roses.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 22, 2010 at 11:54 PM
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Well Taps you have heard of sharp bitter icy warm mushy plum in mouth Creme de la creme. Put that in to be a smoothie.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 22, 2010 at 11:51 PM
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Re: I THINK THIS GUY MAY BE ON LSD.....OR SOMETHING MORE 21ST
Kabu it is a matter of perspective when I look through my invisible eyes sterling wise oh never mind you will only call me the same as you did to poor Uncle Albert. I could make a joke about fridges but this is not the place
posted by
C_C_T
on October 22, 2010 at 11:44 PM
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Re: CC
To be sure brown eyes I wish they would just eat petals, but then they wouldn't have the strength to go to work,, just dream on Femia
posted by
C_C_T
on October 22, 2010 at 11:38 PM
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simply beautifully done! You are perfecting your craft my friend... Great writing! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on October 22, 2010 at 10:24 PM
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A lot of haunting imagery there. I like how you started it off with the butterflies. That really brings a cool dynamic.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 22, 2010 at 6:27 PM
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Amazing.
The flow, the imagery - simply beautiful. I'm just getting back to reading everyone else's work, lol. I loved the ending! So bold and well spoken. this one caught my eye because I have a huge thing for butterflies. I'm about to read your work on Brown Eyes - caught my attention because I have brown eyes... ;) LG
posted by
LadyGhost1970
on October 22, 2010 at 1:41 PM
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CORNCRAKE
That was enchanting as a butterfly in flight old chap.Do have a happy weekend
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 22, 2010 at 1:37 PM
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CORNCRAKE
That was enchanting as a butterfly in flight old chap.Do have a happy weekend
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 22, 2010 at 1:37 PM
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This is so great...
This was enchanting all the way and slamming at the end. I loved the stanze begining something like this words could no be so creamy... it was awesome all of it. Yes I am taking a break I just run in here and read a little or write a little and run back to work...
posted by
Justi
on October 22, 2010 at 1:25 PM
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Hi C.C. I think the butterflies are blue and the color is enchanting. I too had to read your poem twice. I realise that in some poems we can follow the thought patterns exactly the way they come to mind, or guide and manage them the best way we can. Great work.
posted by
csherloc
on October 22, 2010 at 12:16 PM
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Fantastic poem! I loved the close! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 22, 2010 at 11:24 AM
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CC I was entranced by this whole poem. I drifted through your delightful, pleasurable words and descriptions. I had to re-read for I got lost in a turn, but that’s just fine. It is worth it, your poetry is indeed one to be read again and again. I can only imagine one sitting across this perfect beauty and then realizing eh, she’s human!!! I would imagine
the red hot curry would add more spice to life. CC this is a fine bit of work. EE ~ 
posted by
elysianfields
on October 22, 2010 at 11:17 AM
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Creamy words? That's a new concept for me. I'm trying now to get my thoughts around some of them and see about spitting them out for disection.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 22, 2010 at 11:10 AM
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I THINK THIS GUY MAY BE ON LSD.....OR SOMETHING MORE 21ST
CENTURY...OR PERHAPS HE IS JUST SURPRISED AT HER CHOICE OF FOOD I LOVE REALLY REALLY HOT CHILLIE AND I FIND INDONESIAN DISHES THE HOTTEST OF ALL. THE SORT THAT MAKE YOU GO AND PUT YOUR HEAD INTO THE REFRIGERATOR TO COOL DOWN.
posted by
Kabu
on October 22, 2010 at 11:09 AM
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CC
i was just looking at my chinese lantern hanging above my bed and thought of this enchanting poem you just posted. The mystery of a woman and her likes are sometimes surprising then comes the curry of her tast buds the spice of life. Nicely done CC. B. Eyes Lady Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on October 22, 2010 at 10:57 AM
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