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Yes, Shobana, terrific poem. Struck a distinct chord for me.
posted by
Straightforward
on October 23, 2010 at 6:21 PM
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Love freely given is the greatest gift. terrific poem, Shobana.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on October 23, 2010 at 9:52 AM
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This poem is very special. I could just see your mind ticking away as you formed the words into unique phrases.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 22, 2010 at 11:15 AM
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shobana
" A personal relationship set to the sunset settles good love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 22, 2010 at 9:56 AM
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It definitely seems to be the way it works! But, it was highly visual and the words choices were stunningly superb! Just outstanding! Sending my love over the Blogit waves to my dear Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on October 22, 2010 at 9:49 AM
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this is just exquisite, thank you for sharing it
posted by
lionreign
on October 22, 2010 at 8:10 AM
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This is Shobana with her wild dreams of catching moonbeams and feeling them slipping through her fingers. I really thought this was one of your best Shobana. You really slipped inside the poem and fluttered your ability.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 22, 2010 at 6:47 AM
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The way it works
Shobana, this is a very lovely poem.
posted by
MsJudy
on October 21, 2010 at 10:49 PM
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Lots of tender thought in this one Shobana ~ and it makes me ponder more. I like how you have engaged this reader.
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 21, 2010 at 8:38 PM
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Love freely given is the best!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 21, 2010 at 8:18 PM
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I guess not all relations are meant to last forever, some do...some just
stop.
posted by
Kabu
on October 21, 2010 at 8:02 PM
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