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posted by
Lanetay
on October 19, 2010 at 8:52 PM
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Thank you csherloc, glad you liked the poem.
posted by
shobana
on October 19, 2010 at 8:50 PM
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Your poem made me think of all the strange water creatures. This one, the blobfish makes me laugh even though he looks so sad.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 19, 2010 at 4:23 PM
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The sea you speak of is such a wonderful place.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 19, 2010 at 4:06 PM
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Ah yes, the mystics of the sea indeed! What fantastic imagery that flowed beautifully! Love you Sweetie! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on October 19, 2010 at 3:02 PM
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shobana, there are great adventurous fish seeking out the mystics
of the sea, just as there are humans doing the same....very easy to feel drawn into the sea, and become one of those fish..
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posted by
Rumor
on October 19, 2010 at 12:50 PM
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shobana
¬ It looks like a good look. You see the sea’s depth love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 19, 2010 at 9:00 AM
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the beat and pace of this is wonderful and the imagery is just superb but the thing that took my breath was the phrase "the mystics of the sea", great line, great poem, great work!
posted by
lionreign
on October 19, 2010 at 7:30 AM
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Shobana, this has lovely rhythm ~ and indeed poetic thought --- I enjoyed the read; the movement and the feelings from your poem here. xoxox Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 19, 2010 at 6:12 AM
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Nice poem. I felt like I was swimming with the fish who escaped the hook or the net, exploring the mystic depth of the sea.
posted by
csherloc
on October 19, 2010 at 4:23 AM
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They actually came alive in your poem.
posted by
Straightforward
on October 19, 2010 at 1:48 AM
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A saviour of sardines a princess of pilchards. No I won't joke Shobana, it was a very nice idea, all the clever ones seeking respite in a sheltered coral reef or an old wreck or two . One thing one can work ones way into your gentle ideas like passing through swaying seaweed and following your clever little fish. Lovely
posted by
C_C_T
on October 19, 2010 at 12:51 AM
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So beautiful Shobana... Today here in Miami a fish jumped out of the sea and impaled a lady that was sitting in a boat with something
At first they thought it was a barracuda that had bittenher but now they say it was something else... they are not saying what
... Your gorgeous poem made me think of that... weird loll... Excellent work xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on October 18, 2010 at 8:49 PM
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Shobana
Lovely, and it makes me feel the need to get back to the seashore I was born on luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 18, 2010 at 8:29 PM
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Shobana
Lovely! And I was reminded of the large blue heron I saw fishing down in the marsh last weekend, motionless, with infinite patience...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 18, 2010 at 7:00 PM
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Shobana
Aah a new tale of the fishes. Lovely, thanks.
posted by
Justi
on October 18, 2010 at 6:53 PM
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