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I think you're right..Elvie or Maggie Maye, or perhaps both, would make great muses...of course, Elvira is a little softier than Maggie Maye, and not as see-thru.....

posted by Rumor on October 18, 2010 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

I love the pace and tone of this, something a little light hearted and gentle really worked well with the subject.  Great writing!

posted by lionreign on October 18, 2010 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply

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Lauren you are so English I spent most of my youth being teased by what seemed like mature ladies one doesn't realize, well whatever one doesn't realize. I never even realized that when a young girl stood and just stared at one it meant anything, I thought that was what they always did. So I guess I am not very clever to start with. I will try and stay bejeweled.  

posted by C_C_T on October 18, 2010 at 6:46 AM | link to this | reply

now treasure this jewel and stay clever

posted by spiderfly on October 18, 2010 at 2:05 AM | link to this | reply

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Yes especially if one sits on them Sam Oh dear a visual image. Yes Sam I don't really like writing tight lines but it is easier sometimes if one is trying to flash write as opposed to dragging one's baggage across a barren plain. Cheers, trying the green tea with orange cordial or Ribena. They even do a decaffe which is more like the ordinary flavor. 

posted by C_C_T on October 17, 2010 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply

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Well shobana perhaps it is what you call imagination 

posted by C_C_T on October 17, 2010 at 11:09 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCRAKE
Believe me Wiley poor old men dream of pillows. Oh let her have a bit of fun, we were all kids once. 

posted by C_C_T on October 17, 2010 at 11:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CC
You are always so sweet Femia  if I hadn't found this jewel I would have have searched for a rock gem  

posted by C_C_T on October 17, 2010 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you csheroc

posted by C_C_T on October 17, 2010 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Softies
Thank you cheerygirl   

posted by C_C_T on October 17, 2010 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I don't like to be the first to comment...what can I say keep your Muse...
Thank you darling out of the mouths of Babes and Angels

posted by C_C_T on October 17, 2010 at 10:52 PM | link to this | reply

I think we are all a little bit on the softie side when it gets down to brass tacks! I just had to say it that way! I really, really liked the cadence, it had a bit of pep to it and it felt like natural meter even if not planned! sam 

posted by sam444 on October 17, 2010 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply

Hi CC, softie is what you are with  your muse. Very lovely.

posted by shobana on October 17, 2010 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

A beautiful reflection on the situation, I find this to be.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 17, 2010 at 6:03 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCRAKE
You and your muse and Kabu amusing herself at your expense. I think if your muse is filled with eiderdown you're cuzzying up with your pillow is all. Great post old chap

posted by WileyJohn on October 17, 2010 at 3:14 PM | link to this | reply

CC
Wonderful find a Muse to be in your life to fill your heart with joy and words of many the sweetness of a new Love at any age and be Luck to boot Wow! Such a find to keep and cherish in our heart forevermore. Blessings Fema

posted by fememefeme on October 17, 2010 at 3:05 PM | link to this | reply

Excellently written. 

posted by csherloc on October 17, 2010 at 2:38 PM | link to this | reply

Softies

posted by Cheerygirl on October 17, 2010 at 1:00 PM | link to this | reply

I don't like to be the first to comment...what can I say keep your Muse...
at your age you are lucky to find anyone.......Ouch! that hurt.......go box someone else's ears. tee hee

posted by Kabu on October 17, 2010 at 12:21 PM | link to this | reply