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Thank you Lionreign got to go with it or go under.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 15, 2010 at 10:37 PM
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Thank you Sam squeezing the juice out of it.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 15, 2010 at 10:34 PM
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posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 15, 2010 at 11:54 AM
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Brilliant! The last line twists and redefines all the lines prior to it to give a completely different slant - well done!
posted by
lionreign
on October 15, 2010 at 6:50 AM
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Of course there are four leaves, it's just finding it! And then I liked how you wrapped it up with a blade of grass! So inviting, the call to try something new or remember if one has! KUDOS, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 15, 2010 at 5:47 AM
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Wonderful thought Taps I guess you could have tagged along It was all fields in those days and no thoughts of anything nasty,
posted by
C_C_T
on October 15, 2010 at 5:03 AM
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I think you would have been a wonderful childhood friend. I picture you as a boy something like Dillon in
The Secret Garden, with all the special gifts of growing things and befriending animals and birds. What fun we could have had scampering about the forests and fields.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 15, 2010 at 12:05 AM
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Thank you Troosha nice to have you back
posted by
C_C_T
on October 14, 2010 at 11:37 PM
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Re: very lovely, light but so romantic and she will not be able to resist I am
Thank you Kabu if life was that easy
posted by
C_C_T
on October 14, 2010 at 11:34 PM
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Re: Softies
Thank you 2Philomena it is finding a nice muse to make it work
posted by
C_C_T
on October 14, 2010 at 11:31 PM
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Re: C.C...
Yes this muse likes romantic, Rumor, well it's fairly restfull to write.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 14, 2010 at 11:27 PM
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Time to be carefree time to be sad F,S two flavors from the same cup
posted by
C_C_T
on October 14, 2010 at 11:24 PM
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Re: CC
Oh, Femia you see romance in the twinkle of an eye, pleased you like it.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 14, 2010 at 11:22 PM
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Thank you Shobana best to keep it simple, when one is
posted by
C_C_T
on October 14, 2010 at 11:20 PM
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Re: CORNCRAKE
Hi Wiley I didn't see many, but then you probably have better eyesight than I have
posted by
C_C_T
on October 14, 2010 at 11:18 PM
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Thank you E.E. Go away Uncle Albert you can't be E.Es muse she's got a nice hubby.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 14, 2010 at 11:15 PM
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Ah but this indeed - so softly written, your voice yes, romantic. This is a keeper - I am very moved by this poem CC ~ I must borrow your muse. EE
posted by
elysianfields
on October 14, 2010 at 8:40 PM
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CORNCRAKE
Ach you silver tongued devil, all those females laying about, well done romantic old chap,
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 14, 2010 at 7:12 PM
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I think so too..terribly romantic CC. Brilliant.
posted by
shobana
on October 14, 2010 at 6:18 PM
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CC
Very romantic and well stated as one would be in Love accepting the hour glass of time stopped in the arms of a lover and ones feet are tickled with the joy of caring. Wow! Friend Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on October 14, 2010 at 5:05 PM
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So happy and carefree the speaker was...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 14, 2010 at 4:43 PM
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C.C...
it sounds like the perfect place to be...no need to worry about time, and with you as a guide showing her the nicest things, how can she resist?....delightfully romantic..
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posted by
Rumor
on October 14, 2010 at 12:08 PM
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Softies
What a lovely world you create. Your imagery is so wonderful. 'The hour glass has no sand'
posted by
2Philomena
on October 14, 2010 at 11:08 AM
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very lovely, light but so romantic and she will not be able to resist I am
sure.
posted by
Kabu
on October 14, 2010 at 10:56 AM
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A rhythmic and enchanting read!
posted by
Troosha
on October 14, 2010 at 10:19 AM
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