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If I could
Beautiful.

posted by Cheerygirl on October 17, 2010 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

Taking charge of the world for the other, eh?

posted by Straightforward on October 14, 2010 at 4:25 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
You'd just create a paradise for your love, wonderfully said luv.

posted by WileyJohn on October 13, 2010 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Paradise...

posted by Nautikos on October 13, 2010 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

This sort of loyalty is to be applauded!

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 13, 2010 at 7:04 PM | link to this | reply

So enchantingly lovely Sinome, pure thoughts indeed. Just loved it. Thanks so much for your visit.

posted by shobana on October 13, 2010 at 5:34 PM | link to this | reply

Dear Sinome I believe you have just described Heaven. I loved the line about the cat claws. Our cat always curls her claws inward when she sits on her daddy's lap. God bless you dear you have such a beautiful big heart. xoxoxoxoxo

posted by Justi on October 13, 2010 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

What a beautiful wish, and what a wonderful line, where cats claws stayed always curled. Thank you so much for your visits, they keep me going.

posted by UtahJay on October 13, 2010 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely thoughts
and reminded me of both 'Imagine' by John Lennon and 'I would give anything' by Bread

posted by malcolm on October 13, 2010 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

R Aah a place for lovers love. I want to go. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on October 13, 2010 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

Well a very unselfish act Simone, I really liked this because you are extending your feelings instead holding on to them, you flutter into sunshine. 

 

posted by C_C_T on October 13, 2010 at 7:27 AM | link to this | reply

That is just a beautiful wish and it is wonderfully presented.  Only you...  xoxoxox

posted by lionreign on October 13, 2010 at 6:57 AM | link to this | reply