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I sense isolation here.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 12, 2010 at 5:18 PM
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it sounds like lonliness personified....so well done darling.
posted by
Kabu
on October 12, 2010 at 11:52 AM
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Poor little Simone not realizing she was becoming aware of emotions that sweep one on into something hardly bearable but essentially human.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 12, 2010 at 8:47 AM
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there is such tender sadness in this, beyond personal melancholy this is all encompassing and beautiful
posted by
lionreign
on October 12, 2010 at 7:40 AM
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What a poignant write --- a memory so indelible that it shares life in your lines. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 12, 2010 at 7:24 AM
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Sinome
I love the picture, melancholy, and passion at the end.
posted by
BC-A
on October 12, 2010 at 7:24 AM
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