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I sense loneliness while reading this...BTW glad to see that you have returned.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 13, 2010 at 12:24 PM
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maybe we wouldnt want to see in the future
posted by
Lanetay
on October 13, 2010 at 8:40 AM
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Indeed they do csherloc. Thanks so much for your visit.
posted by
shobana
on October 12, 2010 at 7:16 PM
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Oh Shobana, this is a line turner --- page turner...vignettes are within this whole poem of yours and it's so moving. I love this style of your writing. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 12, 2010 at 7:53 AM
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I love the imagery and emotion love.
posted by
BC-A
on October 12, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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Keen observation. Whether we act or stay still, things keep happening,an endless cycle.
posted by
csherloc
on October 12, 2010 at 3:44 AM
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Oh Yes Shobana quite ingenious those eyes? let me think brown , but more innocent blue eyes probably. They do carry the poem along it's lonely pilgrimage. Well done.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 11, 2010 at 11:24 PM
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So very profound and beautiful
We should all take the time to watch and BE. Let time stand still.
posted by
skye08
on October 11, 2010 at 10:24 PM
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She saw a lot! And, at times I think it would be cool to see the future and then I think it would spoil it, too! Love the lone rider on the bike! I've seen in my Bicycling magazine where the lone rider is in the middle of nowhere just enjoying the ride! I had thought about riding the Continental Divide that goes through a part of my state but it is about a 1,200 ride and then I say, not me after all! Lol Love you dearly Sweeetie and I am so pleased you have time for Blogit! I know life can get complicated! My Christopher is going to see me in December and then he is off to Afghanistan in January! I am excited that he is reaching his goal but the mom in me wishes the war were over when I awake in the morning! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on October 11, 2010 at 9:31 PM
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I liked that. It reminds me of my old Aunt Evva who didn't go much except to church on Sunday, but she spent a lot of time at the windows looking out to see what the rest of the world was doing.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 11, 2010 at 7:49 PM
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While she watched)
This poem was so very beautiful.
posted by
MsJudy
on October 11, 2010 at 7:22 PM
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Shobana
Nice to have you back with great poetic style luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 11, 2010 at 7:05 PM
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