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Hmm, Sam maybe. It's the waggoners trail
posted by
C_C_T
on October 11, 2010 at 10:55 PM
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Re: It could be a scene in a movie it is so vivdly written you must have been
Methinks you know too much Kabu do you want your boomerang back
posted by
C_C_T
on October 11, 2010 at 10:53 PM
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I thought the end really set up extended imagery for the reader! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 11, 2010 at 8:46 PM
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It could be a scene in a movie it is so vivdly written you must have been
there.
posted by
Kabu
on October 11, 2010 at 6:37 PM
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Well I haven't seen any movies for a long time Shobana. Most of them are a bit too scary for me. I suppose I had better just be polite for a while, hope you are o.k. and passed your tests. I didn't forget you.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 11, 2010 at 10:53 AM
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True csherloc it is all around us, Thank you for calling.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 11, 2010 at 10:47 AM
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Re: C.C. ....
Well not always Rumor surprises are the norm, but thank you for suggesting such a talent
posted by
C_C_T
on October 11, 2010 at 10:46 AM
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Thank you Lion got to keep staggering on
posted by
C_C_T
on October 11, 2010 at 10:44 AM
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Re: It makes a very cute scene..
Thank you orcalion. People behave so differently To what one would surmise.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 11, 2010 at 10:42 AM
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Thank you E.E. This is a long entangled event but it will have to go to Bye byes.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 11, 2010 at 10:39 AM
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Of this Event ~ "as though the day is too loud" --- what an excellent metaphor --- So much imagery in this I actually felt like I was there in the 'scene'. How intriguing the mother and daughter and the one whom holds a
bundle of flames --- waiting for 'time'. This is yes, a provoking more, shifting poem. Lends more to imagination from all this imagery. ~ Another good write CC -- EE
posted by
elysianfields
on October 11, 2010 at 8:52 AM
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It makes a very cute scene..
posted by
orcalion
on October 11, 2010 at 8:30 AM
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This poem is rich with thought and imagery
posted by
lionreign
on October 11, 2010 at 7:36 AM
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C.C. ....
seems like the gentleman meant no harm and is sensitive enough to apologize...after allm he is the richer for having seen what is in their eyes....thought provoking as always, C.C., which is good.....you see right into the souls of those you write about..
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posted by
Rumor
on October 11, 2010 at 7:30 AM
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Nice poem. Like a true poet,your mind sees, feels and records everything and every now and then ,creates, a new version of life's experiences.
posted by
csherloc
on October 11, 2010 at 4:19 AM
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Hi CC, loved the whole scenario..made me smile, like a scene from a movie. Thanks for the visit and glad you liked the poem.
posted by
shobana
on October 11, 2010 at 12:23 AM
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