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Ah yes
they are starting to fall but so lovely and graceful in their decent.
posted by
Bel_
on October 17, 2010 at 6:46 AM
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I really like the ambiguities of the first line.
posted by
Ciel
on October 12, 2010 at 1:22 AM
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It's that time of the year.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 11, 2010 at 7:08 PM
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A wonderful succinct depiction of Autumn.. How have you been my friend ? xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on October 11, 2010 at 5:24 AM
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nice, compact and vivid...
posted by
Justi
on October 10, 2010 at 12:48 PM
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Nautikos
You have brought us fall in all it's colourful glory with well written words, a lovely Haiku
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 10, 2010 at 11:24 AM
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I love this it is so good so well done someone gave me a book of modern
poets recently...awful stuff....the haiku was all wrong ....it is refreshing to read yours here.
posted by
Kabu
on October 10, 2010 at 10:42 AM
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Naut, you have painted in words, a stunning palette mix of Autumn colors. It is gorgeous, your haiku. I am inspired...I so enjoyed your descriptive words. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 10, 2010 at 8:45 AM
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Deep. It seems that fall leavesin wind,black birds in the corn.milk in morn
posted by
Mystereo
on October 10, 2010 at 7:02 AM
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