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Maybe indeed! I really liked the closing couplet! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 10, 2010 at 8:52 PM
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CORNCAKE
Work it through. Writing poems does that sir. RBC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on October 10, 2010 at 4:28 AM
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Yes F.S bu it does get easier.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2010 at 10:45 PM
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Of course Wiley One should always stick to their own interpretation one does not want to be a psychologist. Well done
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2010 at 10:44 PM
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Thank you cheerygirl
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2010 at 10:38 PM
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CORNCRAKE
That reminds me of drinking alcohol; "of golden liquid glowing where blood is flowing Unfortunately returning to normal was not acheived easily" for me, and my feelings always were slanted to a new angle.
Now maybe your poem had nothing to do with my way of thinking but what the heck, it made great sense to me and that's all good poetry should do is it not my friend.?
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 9, 2010 at 7:02 PM
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Those feelings can be hard to shake.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 9, 2010 at 5:22 PM
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posted by
Cheerygirl
on October 9, 2010 at 2:28 PM
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Thank you E.E. I know that you have a deep understanding of most things. We have to feel our way into emotions, because most people are different.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2010 at 1:14 PM
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Yes you are right Rumor I keep meaning to keep comments short and they keep getting longer. Maybe tomorrow will be different, Don't have nightmares.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2010 at 1:10 PM
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Thank you Sir and sometimes it is disappointing
posted by
C_C_T
on October 9, 2010 at 1:07 PM
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Obliteration is such a finite word isn't it CC ~ the 'utter' removal.
So with Maybe --- I begin with this inspiring --- sensual and remarkable in imagery to analogy poem of yours.
CC - yes, sometimes we shouldn't hold on but instead let it rage --- let it go freely --- with or without noise. I find bliss is there for any - for our taking. and this CC puts a new 'slant' a new angle on the idea of change and past and present...is how I see by this, EE
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elysianfields
on October 9, 2010 at 10:09 AM
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C.C...
"this is a feeling that obliterates all previous inclination" - ah yes, that one word "maybe" can do that..yes, its a very wishy washy word and this is about as startling as it gets...so, one's paradise may be gained or lost, all hinging on that not-so-innocent word "maybe".
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posted by
Rumor
on October 9, 2010 at 10:06 AM
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sometimes angles doesn't change and our past becomes our present
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on October 9, 2010 at 9:00 AM
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